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the lighthouse stands by the edge of the sea- a solid tower guarding the f o r b i d d i n g highway of ships a picture of q u i e t tranquility in an eternal WAR of sea and shore then a GASP- as clouds swirl like sheets and thunder claps giant hands the wind is r o a r i n g across the restless emptiness of steel blue water and foaming waves crash against the lighthouse trying to rock his foundation but lighthouse holds on t i g h t as forked lightning moves across the sky the whole sky lights up for a moment . . . the storm is VIOLENT and determined to topple lighthouse into the sea but he digs d e e p into the jagged rocks (this is not his first storm) r a i n pours in torrents- the sea surging and F A L L I N G back . . . the fury of waves, a chorus of v o i c e s screaming threatening, raging, lashing into the lighthouse like a wild banshee- thunder and wild winds in time drift out to SEA and lighthouse utters a sigh . . . ________________________ July 26, 2017 Free Verse/Symphony of the Sea Copyright Protected, ID 923597 Written for the contest, Lighthouse sponsor, Eve Roper First Place

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Date: 8/1/2017 12:26:00 AM
Awesome imagery and win with this stormy poem Constance. Congratulations on your first placement! ; )
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Date: 7/31/2017 1:01:00 PM
Congrats on your win - love your descriptive write.
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Date: 7/30/2017 7:05:00 PM
Fabulous descriptive imagery Constance many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/29/2017 10:21:00 AM
Broken Wings, thank you for entering the contest, you made your poem move and come to life. I felt I was in the storm a feeling that I was looking for. A beautiful piece of art, congratulations on your win! :) ~*
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Date: 7/29/2017 7:17:00 AM
Back for congrats Constance!!
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Date: 7/29/2017 5:11:00 AM
Lovely depiction of the struggle between noble lighthouse and the assailing storm! Congratulations on your First Place win!
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Date: 7/26/2017 6:35:00 PM
I came to read of shoes but turned to your lighthouse, I'm glad I did, you captured the fury that surrounds it...good luck
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Date: 7/26/2017 2:14:00 PM
I can feel your lighthouse on full alert! Hear the sound of the waves and hear the roar of the waves. GL in contest! Nicely done!
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Date: 7/26/2017 1:33:00 PM
What a glorious lighthouse poem! I thought this to be a spectacular and dynamic piece my friend! What a fabulous write! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! You have impressed me!
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