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Written for the A-form contest sponsored by Constance La France.  Inspired by the quote given, took me back, reminiscing my late bestfriend that now rests in heaven. 

Symphony of Soul

“I carry your heart with me (I carry it in my heart) I am never without it..."  E.E. Cummings
Another day soaked in the melody of your musical memories. Breathless I seek, for a rosy gleam of morning glories, cascading calming beams in tangerine tints, where~ dulcet dreams still linger over sun-kissed meadows, engraved with clandestine seeds we’ve scattered across fields of fireflies flaring childhood sagas woven with glistening ink flowing in sapphire syllables, like hypnotic hieroglyphics carved from tears left untold. Yet~ I ponder, what is heaven like, without me, by your side, do you still laugh, joyously to the thoughts of how we swirled and twirled like kindred spirits, lost in our own sacred spheres ricocheting with, lyrical light, that emanated emerald euphoria.. Maybe, in the elysian castle, where you reside, angels would, never let you forget promises we made beneath moonlit skies, on the nights when the world too did abandon~ peacock-feathered peacefulness that we truly deserved, despite our, quivering hearts, that beat in tune to the grief-struck stars… Remember me, when fragrant flowers flourish in colors of~ soft mauve sunsets, we painted in butterfly brushstrokes. Tonight, I’m listening to the waves whisper serene serenades, unraveling sparkling tales of your seraphic realm in violet verses, for I am still healing, alone, reminiscing, wishing, someday, when every jewel in the horizon falls in~ xanthic streaks, like autumnal leaves, wilting to the absence of, your loyal presence, I’ll find a canvas, to immortalize this love~ zestfully; while souvenirs of yesterday’s twilight twinkle, you remain the poem of my soul.
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Rodrigues Avatar
June 28, 2024 at 6:18 AM
I ponder, what is heaven like, without me, by your side, do you still laugh… that emanated emerald euphoria…and all the explosions of color and alliteration. Potent is this part for me: “Breathless I seek, for a rosy gleam of morning glories” My cousin went to heaven seven or so years ago, after Christmas. This verse sparkles. Congrats on this amazing write, I.E.!
La France Avatar
May 30, 2024 at 7:12 AM
Ink, congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing poem, this is one of my favorite quotes, Constance
Empress Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so much dear constance
Goldsmith Avatar
May 26, 2024 at 9:30 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative/wonderful Abecedarian "Symphony of Soul" write. Have A Blessed Day Writing Away With Your Win...........
Empress Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:23 AM
Thank you so much dear paula
George Avatar
May 25, 2024 at 8:04 AM
Such lovely words to a friend. So captivating and it just flowed. "I’ll find a canvas, to immortalize this love." A pure love indeed and it shall live through our countless lives. I hope healing comes knocking, but the memories should stay. Great piece Ink.
Empress Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Thank you so very much dear tonye always grateful for your poetic presence and sincere comments truly
Wraith Avatar
May 22, 2024 at 5:19 PM
Beautifully Done Empress!!
Empress Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Appreciate your kindness thank you so much
Hind Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 9:06 PM
Sucha a beautiful verse for your friend- I am sure she's aware of it; I hope so... loved every line!
Empress Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 7:22 AM
Thank you so very much always
Dietrich Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 9:14 AM
This one is amazing. I could follow it easily maybe for the line breaks between the words spelled out. Also your usual great imagery. A fave
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:04 AM
Wow that means alot coming from you sweet andrea! Thank you so very much for the fave too i appreciate your poetic support truly
Buhagiar Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 3:22 AM
Your poetry always hypnotises me. Brilliant alliteration and flow. Best for a win.
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:07 AM
Thats so kind of you to say dear victor thank you so very much
Buehler Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 9:17 PM
This is breathtakingly beautiful, Ink. It has gorgeous imagery, as your poems always do, which I admire very much. This is a fave. :)
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:11 AM
Thank you so very much dear Evelyn not just for your thoughtful comment but also for the fave! Im beyond grateful
Rose  Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 6:57 PM
You flourish like a flower when you write with great passion Ink, such blooming poetry, I love every bit of it, from a to z
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:11 AM
Awwn thank you so very much sweet rose! Im so grateful for your kindness
DiMino Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 8:37 AM
"do you still laugh, joyously to the thoughts of how we swirled and twirled like kindred spirits, lost in our own sacred spheres ricocheting with, lyrical light, that emanated emerald euphoria.." I think we do. Why would we want a heaven without loving consciousness to experience and recall infinitely? Silly to think that God would allow us such fond thoughts, and not Himself cherish them. Have no doubts. Heaven is feeling friend, and not spiritual stranger. What I believe anyway.
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:15 AM
Thank you joe i appreciate you taking time to leave a very detailed and sincere comment truly. Sending you light always
DiMino Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 10:26 AM
I know, the poem is about missing and longing. Beautifully done! Your exquisite words were not lost on me. Brilliantly expressed!
Empress Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 8:58 AM
Hi joe, thank you for visiting my page, but here in my poem i did not doubt God or heaven. As i am a believer , if you have a look at the whole poem and note you might have an idea of what this is about. It isnt about doubts! Thanks for your feedback
One Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 7:25 AM
A lovely dedication to your friend who you will always carry in your heart.. This abecedarian is a stunning exploration of love, memory, and longing, beautifully crafted with vivid imagery and emotive language. Each line flows seamlessly into the next, creating so much feelings that capture the reader's heart. The opening line, "Another day soaked in the melody of your musical memories," immediately sets a nostalgic tone, suggesting that your days are filled with reflections on a cherished past.. It is a masterful blend of emotion and artistry, capturing the essence of a profound and enduring love. The use of rich, sensory imagery and the seamless flow of thoughts and feelings make it a deeply moving and memorable piece.
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:16 AM
Thank you sweet silent one your kindness i always appreciate! And you always leave such detailed feedback that ensures writers feel heard and felt! Grateful and humbled beyond words!
Pandit Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 5:36 AM
I am in awe of the tremendous work that speaks to emotions emanating from the heart. Wonderfully poetic lines weave-in heartfelt reflections, Ink: --dulcet dreams still linger over sun-kissed meadows, engraved with clandestine seeds we’ve scattered across fields of fireflies flaring childhood sagas woven with glistening ink flowing in sapphire syllables,--- soft mauve sunsets, we painted in butterfly brushstrokes---Deserving of all the accolades. A FAVE!
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:16 AM
Ah thank you dear Vijay not just for this detailed and thoughtful comment but also for the fave! Im truly honored and humbled by your compliments and kindness. Always! Grateful
George Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 5:32 AM
Simply lovely.... that's all I have to say. The powerful emotions of love and longing you convey make our hearts inundated with mixed feelings of joy and sorrow. The beauty you pour into your lines make you a much loved and wanted presence on Poetry Soup. Your alliterations are spontaneous. Abecedarian is not an easy poetic form. In your dexterous hands, nothing is difficult. "I ponder, what is heaven like, without me, by your side, do you still laugh, joyously to the thoughts of how we swirled and twirled like kindred spirits, lost in our own sacred spheres ricocheting with, lyrical light, that emanated emerald euphoria.." Oh, How poetic are these lines! A sure winner....
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:18 AM
Sweet valsa! Im so very grateful and touched by your detailed and kind compliments and feedback! Your comments always feel so very sincere and genuine! You are such a precious poetic soul! Grateful always
Onpaper Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 1:29 AM
Another day soaked in the melody of your musical memories... mmm love that beginning.. fields of fireflies flaring childhood sagas woven with glistening ink flowing in sapphire syllables, ooo alliteration… the warmth this piece brings is amazing papi.. fragrant flowers flourish in colors of soft mauve sunsets, magical imagery.. souvenirs of yesterday’s twilight twinkle, you remain the poem of my soul. gorgeously tributed piece..
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:19 AM
Papi your support means alot always thank you so very much trulu
Greenhough Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 10:07 PM
This is a beautiful poem with a sweet ending. It goes to the heart. It is amazing how you wrote it with all the letters of the alphabet.
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:20 AM
Awwn thank you so much dear hilda im truly honored and humbled by your support always grateful to receive such kindness
Rhymes Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 7:05 PM
So sweet … love it
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:21 AM
Awn thank you dahlin
Beaufort Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 6:39 PM
IE, a wonderful tribute to a best friend. Whoever this was must have known how fortunate they were to have you as a friend. Nice to immortalize these feelings in poetry for all of us to ponder. Very pleasant to think about although some sadness expressed at the loss. Makes me think we need to enjoy each day since we have no guarantee for tomorrow.
Empress Avatar
May 20, 2024 at 1:22 AM
Dear duke thank you for not just reading but also feeling my emotions expressed here. I appreciate always your sincere and selfless support
Poet Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 5:50 PM
Dear Ink, This poem is a profound and heartfelt exploration of yearning and nostalgia for a love that has been gone. You eloquently expressed profound and melodious concepts centered on reminiscences of a previous romantic connection, imbued with a mixture of wistfulness, sadness, and a longing for what used to be. The poem employs a sophisticated and expressive vocabulary, which effectively conjures up vivid images of feelings and memories. You also utilize sensory details and metaphorical language to effectively express the intensity of emotions, as seen by phrases such as "cascading calming beams in tangerine tints" and "engraved with clandestine seeds we've scattered across fields of fireflies." Alliteration, consonance, and assonance are employed to enhance the melodic quality and profound emotional impact of the poetry.
Empress Avatar
May 21, 2024 at 12:13 AM
Thank you so much for leaving such a thoughtful and detailed comment dr sotto im always grateful for your kindness and support
Puddifoot Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 2:35 PM
this may just be one of the best poems you've written; it has a deep poignancy, but more than that it flows so seamlessly and naturally, which is not easy to achieve with abecedarian - a really impressive write
Puddifoot Avatar
May 18, 2024 at 3:10 AM
yes i can imagine the work that went into it, it would've taken me two days lol
Empress Avatar
May 17, 2024 at 11:58 PM
Oh wow really that means alot dear charlotte, it took me two hours to write this and post. Thank you so much for reading and for leaving such a thoughtful comment. I appreciate you.
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