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Symphony of a Battered Woman

His cold hand graced the softness of my battered skin. He was a dead man but he walked in front of my eyes. His patterns of repetitive punches flew and sorrow filled screams coming from my heart never stopped him from rotting away. He continued to be dead but I saw him well alive, as I thought the law would never capture his deviance and pull him to the morgue.

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Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 8/12/2016 10:41:00 PM

Intense piece written here...please post more!!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/12/2016 12:57:00 PM

- A great, deep poems Jasmine - Well done :) - Welcome to Poetry Soup :) - hugs // Sun :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/11/2016 6:13:00 PM

Jasmine,, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) We are Lucky To Have you. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Jasmin Walker
Date: 8/12/2016 11:08:00 AM

Thank you ^^

Skat A

Date: 8/11/2016 5:58:00 PM

Lovely bio, Jasmine, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :) Drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs **YNR - SKAT**

Jasmin Walker
Date: 8/12/2016 11:08:00 AM

Thank you :)