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alone, girl, crying, sad, nature, sollitude

- Sympathy -

With Broken Wings ~ angels can not fly free
Dont ask how seriously
Always support a friend









http://www.howmanysyllables.com
Kimo : 10-7-6
14.04.2016
A-L Andresen :)
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Gazbowski Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 5:07 PM
Hauntingly beautiful.
Andresen Avatar
April 24, 2016 at 6:54 AM
- Thanks for friendly visits and lovely comments, Lenny :) - hugs // Sun :)
Devnath  Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 2:56 PM
Excellent poem my lovely friend. 7+ sure. Loved always my lovely friend, bl
Andresen Avatar
April 23, 2016 at 3:05 PM
- Thanks for visiting and a 7 and comments, dear Bl - hugs // Sun :)
Rv Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:45 PM
How lovely!! This is marvellous! :) :)
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:50 PM
- Sneha, thanks for the comments and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Haight Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 4:09 PM
Such a lovely, unselfish thought in your Kimo, Anne Lise. A lot said in so few words. Hugs, Sandra
Andresen Avatar
April 18, 2016 at 1:11 PM
- Thank you very much, Sandra - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:17 PM
wow, you are a GREAT supportive friend,and I love this poem.
Andresen Avatar
April 17, 2016 at 1:43 PM
- Thanks for the comments and visit, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devnath  Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 1:51 PM
True friendship never dies. An excellent foresight my lovely lovely friend. 7+. Loved always, bl
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 2:25 PM
- Nice to think about, Bl ............ I have a good friend in India :) - Thanks for visiting and a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Trifiatis Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 7:03 AM
Friendship always could heal a broken wing! Excellent human message, dear Anne-Lise!
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 2:21 PM
- Friendship means a lot, Demetrios - Thank you for being one of my friends :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gazbowski Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 10:01 PM
True words Anne-Lise. Thoughtful.
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 5:21 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Lenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ashe Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 9:08 PM
This is an interesting form and your concern for a friend makes this all the more insightful! Nice Write Anne-Lise! :-)
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 5:20 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Walter :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Onclaud Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 6:37 PM
such a compassionate write for a friend, anne!... happy day and huggs
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 5:20 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ogundare Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 3:35 PM
Thanks for the needed advice, great poem.~Abosede.
Andresen Avatar
April 15, 2016 at 5:19 AM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Abosede :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kendrick Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 12:18 PM
Good advice..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 1:15 PM
- Thanks for visiting and comments, Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Smith Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:21 AM
A beautiful poem showing such care for a friend...a fave
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:37 AM
- I just want peace and love, Tim ... we have enough wars in the world - Thanks for visiting and a fav. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
La France Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:12 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you for the lovely poem and support , I know who my friends are and who I can count on when the journey gets rocky ~
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:33 AM
- In a Garden with beautiful flowers ...... I just want delicious fragrance, birdsong and beautiful colors ..... it's a small desire for us all - Thank you my friend, B.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hamilton Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 9:16 AM
Judging without understanding is not friendship, nice message Anne Lise!
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 11:06 AM
- You are right, John - Thanks for visiting and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Allison Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 8:14 AM
We all need to support eachother Anne Lise - great poem for our lovely Broken wings:-) hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 3:34 PM
Sadly it is getting more and more difficult to know who you can trust - i hate the way the site is going recently:-( hugs jan xx
Andresen Avatar
April 14, 2016 at 8:21 AM
- Here at the soup it is sometimes difficult to know your real friends - but I know they exist :) - Thank you my friend Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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