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Sympathetic Symphony

Two lovers requite one is lonesome
Calling of a loon in the darkest night
Cannot ascend or descend without the loving water
One chasing the other into deeper waters
A sad song from the drowning pool
Struck by your own arrow
A love bird does carol
The unreachable dream harrows
Chasing the unrequited down the straight and narrow
The black road reflects as the deep lake
Flying high diving in with all mistake
Lost in the beauty but one is lost
In silence one did not count the cost
A loon in the darkest night
a comical tragedy the loony tune

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/29/2017 11:58:00 AM
This is sort of parody and comical stalking of Cupid and Psyche compared to loons the birds Stalking Is Funny If It Is Female After Male phttp://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/StalkingIsFunnyIfItIsFemaleAfterMale
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Date: 1/29/2017 11:50:00 AM
http://www.greenwoodwildlife.org/loon-alert/
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