Sydney, My Angel

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For my daughter.

Whispered breaths, gentle breeze, blushing hearts of sanguine hue Wings aflutter of gossamer lace, pure, gentle, delicate and true Luminous lucence, crystalline glow, soft translucence and heavenly bloom Beautiful glimmer in radiant sweetness, all the splendor that is you

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/28/2015 3:56:00 PM

this is a gorgeous little gem, Ralph (I think you mean breaths, the noun not verb).

James Inman
Date: 12/29/2015 7:01:00 AM

Thank you for pointing that out Andrea, about half the words were misspelled, LOL. Corrected all that I saw.

Julia Ward

Date: 8/13/2015 3:12:00 AM

This is a lovely tribute to your daughter! Julia, :)

Constance La France

Date: 8/9/2015 9:40:00 PM

James, this is so beautiful and full of deep love, a wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my radomling poem

Cona Adams

Date: 7/22/2015 9:15:00 AM

What a sweet tribute to your daughter. She's a lucky girl.

James Inman
Date: 7/22/2015 2:50:00 PM

Thank you Cona.

Pam Deremer

Date: 7/21/2015 4:54:00 PM

Thank you for sharing. Have you had a recent loss? If you have, my heart goes out to you.

James Inman
Date: 7/22/2015 7:17:00 AM

Pam, thank you for your comment, and forgive me if I have mislead you. No, it is simply a tribute to my sweet, gentle and very artistic younger daughter who at 13 is already a much better writer then I.