James Inman Poet Quatrain

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For my daughter.

Sydney, My Angel

Whispered breaths, gentle breeze, blushing hearts of sanguine hue
Wings aflutter of gossamer lace, pure, gentle, delicate and true
Luminous lucence, crystalline glow, soft translucence and heavenly bloom
Beautiful glimmer in radiant sweetness, all the splendor that is you

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Andrea Dietrich December 28, 2015 at 3:56 PM this is a gorgeous little gem, Ralph (I think you mean breaths, the noun not verb). James Inman December 29, 2015 at 7:01 AM Thank you for pointing that out Andrea, about half the words were misspelled, LOL. Corrected all that I saw.

Julia Ward August 13, 2015 at 3:12 AM This is a lovely tribute to your daughter! Julia, :)

Constance La France August 9, 2015 at 9:40 PM James, this is so beautiful and full of deep love, a wonderful 7 and thanks for visiting my radomling poem

Cona Adams July 22, 2015 at 9:15 AM What a sweet tribute to your daughter. She's a lucky girl. James Inman July 22, 2015 at 2:50 PM Thank you Cona.

Pam Deremer July 21, 2015 at 4:54 PM Thank you for sharing. Have you had a recent loss? If you have, my heart goes out to you. James Inman July 22, 2015 at 7:17 AM Pam, thank you for your comment, and forgive me if I have mislead you. No, it is simply a tribute to my sweet, gentle and very artistic younger daughter who at 13 is already a much better writer then I.