Swizzled

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Poetic Form: Haiku

Inspired: 2023 October

Image: Mango Rum Swizzle by The Social Sipper

Pin de Wlsghk en ?? en 2023 | Lineas decorativas, Marcos para texto, Dibujos de labios

sweet-tempered mango host rime swims of lime twist and mint leaves ere lost time

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Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/6/2023 6:46:00 PM

Sounds yummy William. Save one for me please! hugs :)

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/6/2023 8:34:00 PM

Linda, either with or withou the rum, it truly is yummy! Aloha, William

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/31/2023 11:05:00 AM

Bottoms up, Hilo poet. I never drink but this looks tantalizing.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/31/2023 11:13:00 AM

Lol, tho' rum's an opt, used or not, time washes away with the surging surf! Aloha, William