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Switching On the Light

each room bright well lit I find myself switching off a light that’s not on it’s off it’s bright feast to the sight walls are textured white the moon looms when the brightness dims on shadowed limbs outside-in and inside-out and upside-down the lids close and darkness hearkens dreams and nightmares and in betweens til morning sits up in its time and frolics in my stead

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Date: 8/30/2023 10:20:00 AM
Loved this! I love the metaphor of switching off a light that's not on and morning sitting up...wonderful writing!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 4:44:00 PM
Thank you, dear Paige!
Date: 8/29/2023 3:55:00 PM
A poem of whimsicality and charm. Love the personification of morning at the end. This is a fave for me.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 6:16:00 AM
Thank you so much! I appreciate your fave! :)
Date: 8/29/2023 11:59:00 AM
I love this abstract piece Kim, it’s actually very easy to visualise this whole poem, but I know it’s very difficult to pen them, excellently written, cheers David
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 6:17:00 AM
If you can easily picture, I’ve done my job :) Thank you, David!
Date: 8/29/2023 10:48:00 AM
Wonderful wording Kim. Full Moon is on August 31st; maybe this same scene will take place in this room?
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 8/30/2023 8:33:00 AM
Perhaps, but tomorrow is a super full blue moon!!!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 6:18:00 AM
Perhaps! Yesterday I saw an orange moon.
Date: 8/29/2023 9:28:00 AM
- A great poem, Kim :) - We feel more secure in the light than in the dark - hugs
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 8/30/2023 6:18:00 AM
We sure do! Thank you, Anne-Lise!

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