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Uncommon Sun frisks mercury— heat's blight On Winter's frame around tree trunks and boughs, Shrieking frost shattered— melts in her tears, rights. Atypical thaw for this season's height, Where my mime yet waits to move for the clouds; Uncommon Sun frisks mercury— heat's blight. While setting back at the set of twilight— My heart's glassy soil's whiff— portrayals ploughed, Shrieking frost shattered— melts in her tears, rights. A hiding mood that left the moon behind In wisps of air, still by strains of dark's shroud Uncommon Sun frisks mercury— heat's blight. Repeated turn-arounds of the street lights— Where essence freaks in the glitter; glade pound, Shrieking frost shattered— melts in her tears, rights. Of Nature believable; hasn't died— Through the Winter's Time, waning about how Uncommon Sun frisks mercury— heat's blight; Shrieking frost shattered— melts in her tears, rights.

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Date: 2/1/2024 6:08:00 PM
Nicely crafted villanelle with profound thought and dark impact.
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Date: 2/1/2024 12:03:00 PM
What an awesome arrangement of words and great use of form.. Its deep and dark but impacts the reader.. nicely done..
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Date: 2/1/2024 11:29:00 AM
What a brilliant write this is dear paige, from assonance to alliterations and rhymes and descriptive diction that depicts soulful emotions, i just couldnt help but feel so much reading this. And for some reason hits so strong too. I especially love the ending. I hope the weather is ok there? Getting a bit warmer or colder? Sending you light always! Pleasure always reading your work talented soul
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Paige Hind
Date: 2/1/2024 5:57:00 PM
Hey <3 The weather was considerably warm the other week and it's not very cold now. Thanks for your interest. Light and love, just me!
Date: 2/1/2024 8:49:00 AM
Lovely poem, so smooth and full of imagery. Don't worry, summer will arrive.
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Date: 1/31/2024 11:10:00 PM
A very creative villanelle this is, Paige . Winters here are much more mild than in the old days
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