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swirls of bliss

and in my sleep,
astral springs weave
blue swirls of bliss…

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Valsa George

Date: 12/14/2024 9:01:00 PM

Astral springs weaving swirls of bliss in sleep. I feel it all over. Close my eyes again to have that feeling once more. in this ephemeral state, we get inspiration, solace and deep connection with our inner selves. After a good sleep, we wake up rejuvenated. Beautiful gem of a poem, dear Empress. Belated Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/22/2024 12:05:00 PM

Hurrah on another first place one, Sweetie

Terry Flood

Date: 9/20/2024 3:05:00 PM

Hey, I so wanna have that dream… where’s me wacky backy ;-) Seriously ‘Inky’, thoroughly enjoyed. Congrats. Terry

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/18/2024 7:43:00 AM

CONGRATS on your win with this lovely piece! Janice

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/17/2024 10:01:00 PM

congratulations dear poet.

Karen Croft

Date: 9/17/2024 8:35:00 PM

Congratulations on this beauty!

Marilene Evans

Date: 9/17/2024 7:05:00 PM

Congratulations. Sweet thoughts, blissful dreams ...

Ink Empress
Date: 9/19/2024 1:51:00 PM

Thank you dear talented soul always a pleasure hearing from you!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/17/2024 5:38:00 PM

Such lovely wording! Congratulations, Ink!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/19/2024 1:19:00 PM

Thank you dear kim it comes as a surprise! And im truly pleased and honored! Grateful for your kindness

P.M. Richter

Date: 9/15/2024 3:06:00 PM

Profound poetry ~ I enjoyed the experience.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/19/2024 1:18:00 PM

Thank you so kind of you to say and visit! Appreciate your thoughtful response

Marugu Mo

Date: 9/10/2024 1:38:00 AM

one of my fav poetry forms. Love this one. Despite their brevity, than-bauks are not easy to do. Well done

Ink Empress
Date: 9/19/2024 1:18:00 PM

Thank you so much yes they arent as easy they may look or seem appreciate always your kindness and generous support truly

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/8/2024 1:16:00 PM

Good one, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. You made it look easy. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Sara K

Ink Empress
Date: 9/18/2024 11:20:00 AM

Thank you dear sara k always grateful for your support

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/7/2024 5:48:00 PM

nothing like a sweet slumber, ink...love the alliteration and tonality of your than bauk! sending white light...

Ink Empress
Date: 9/18/2024 11:20:00 AM

Thank you so very much dear nette i appreciate your comment truly

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/7/2024 10:28:00 AM

Ohhh I love it. This was a fun easy contest. Poems true to this form are surprisingly difficult to come up with

Ink Empress
Date: 9/7/2024 10:41:00 AM

So true i remember doing this for a joseph contest. Thank you sweet andrea i appreciate your visit and feedback

Paige Hind

Date: 9/6/2024 12:43:00 PM

Oh, this is so, so beautiful, Ink! I am thoroughly enchanted...put your ideas in my head when I sleep, lol.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/7/2024 6:54:00 AM

Dear paige you are always so kind and sweet thank you so very much truly

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 9/5/2024 8:14:00 PM

Comforting thought in the calming blue. It is short but sweet.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/7/2024 6:51:00 AM

So kind of you as always dear hilda. I appreciate your support truly

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 9/5/2024 7:23:00 PM

my, my ~ another level! sublimely beautiful

Ink Empress
Date: 9/7/2024 6:38:00 AM

Thank you dear seeker, whenever i use the word bliss i think of your poems now. As its now your word. Appreciate your kindness truly

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/5/2024 1:35:00 PM

Very imaginative! We do leave our bodies, other dimensions of experience when sleeping. My experience anyway -- many convinced that I am not all here to begin with. Love it! Well done.

Ink Empress
Date: 9/7/2024 6:36:00 AM

Thank you dear joe i do appreciate always your kindness and support truly

Silent One

Date: 9/5/2024 12:27:00 PM

Hey Inkz.... You did Kim's challenge really well... sounds like a serene place when you can achieve such bliss in your life.... The use of sleep, springs and swirls are good choices for the alliteration part of this form.. Best of luck in the contest..

Ink Empress
Date: 9/7/2024 6:35:00 AM

Only in my sleep yes. Thank you for reading and your best wishes

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/5/2024 11:05:00 AM

Dearest Inky, your words "swirl" with the energy of dreams. This poem is poetic "bliss" with amazing images. I am carried away on their joyful waves of blue. Best wishes for the contest, sweet friend. Blessings of sweet, swirling dreams dressed in astral blue! Samzy~

Ink Empress
Date: 9/7/2024 6:26:00 AM

Samszy! You are always so kind and leaves my heart full with your generous and sincere feedback! Thank you so very much for always being so supportive

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 9/5/2024 10:47:00 AM

And you deserve this and so much more Ink, bliss, blessings, beauty and best of everything life has to offer you !

Ink Empress
Date: 9/7/2024 6:23:00 AM

Thank you i appreciate your kindness

Susan Lawrence

Date: 9/5/2024 6:44:00 AM

….and you have captured me within the bliss you describe …. Loving being here with you dear Ink . Hugs, Susan :)

Ink Empress
Date: 9/5/2024 7:28:00 AM

Dear susan! Its so nice to see you around on soup, I remember when I first joined, you were always very supportive from the very start and i love your poems! I miss reading you! Will visit now to see if youv posted. Sending you light poetic soul

Tom Woody

Date: 9/5/2024 5:50:00 AM

Gorgeous in its simplicity, profound in its projection of bliss and peace. Hope you're feeling well this week

Ink Empress
Date: 9/5/2024 7:35:00 AM

Dear tomsz, feel a bit better, hope you are having an amazing week too! Always so good to see you in my comments, been a bit occupied with other things so havent been able to respond here or read much but hopefully this weekend i can! Thank you again

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/5/2024 5:46:00 AM

Dear Empress, You brought a true sense of peace in your Than-Bauk. It is a thought that I feel I could easily meditate on while in a mindful state. Thanks for bringing a little more peace into my life and something to contemplate. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Ink Empress
Date: 9/5/2024 7:37:00 AM

Dear daniel, its so good to see you here and i hope you do know how i do appreciate your support and kindness truly! Been a bit away: but now will visit your page to read your workx thank you for being here and for always seeing and feeling the depth of anything i write

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 9/5/2024 5:35:00 AM

You captured the enigmatic mysteries of sleep and dreams with your expression and metaphor, IE

Ink Empress
Date: 9/5/2024 7:51:00 AM

Dear clive you always understand my metaphors and words, which is a blessing really for any writer thank you so much truly for your visit and comment

Lioness Onpaper

Date: 9/5/2024 3:37:00 AM

and in my sleep, astral springs weave blue swirls of bliss…!!! These lines hit hard like a mic drop!!! Damn!!! Such power emanating from such few short lines…papi u just now howto hit the right spot in the right way aeee … just absolutely gorgeous!!!

Ink Empress
Date: 9/5/2024 8:04:00 AM

Ah papi u da best! I have to write one more poem but lets see hahah

swirls of bliss

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