swirls of bliss

Astral springs weaving swirls of bliss in sleep. I feel it all over. Close my eyes again to have that feeling once more. in this ephemeral state, we get inspiration, solace and deep connection with our inner selves. After a good sleep, we wake up rejuvenated. Beautiful gem of a poem, dear Empress. Belated Congratulations!

Hurrah on another first place one, Sweetie

Hey, I so wanna have that dream… where’s me wacky backy ;-) Seriously ‘Inky’, thoroughly enjoyed. Congrats. Terry

CONGRATS on your win with this lovely piece! Janice

congratulations dear poet.

Congratulations on this beauty!

Congratulations. Sweet thoughts, blissful dreams ...

Such lovely wording! Congratulations, Ink!

Profound poetry ~ I enjoyed the experience.

one of my fav poetry forms. Love this one. Despite their brevity, than-bauks are not easy to do. Well done

Good one, reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. You made it look easy. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us. Sara K

nothing like a sweet slumber, ink...love the alliteration and tonality of your than bauk! sending white light...

Ohhh I love it. This was a fun easy contest. Poems true to this form are surprisingly difficult to come up with

Oh, this is so, so beautiful, Ink! I am thoroughly enchanted...put your ideas in my head when I sleep, lol.

Comforting thought in the calming blue. It is short but sweet.

my, my ~ another level! sublimely beautiful

Very imaginative! We do leave our bodies, other dimensions of experience when sleeping. My experience anyway -- many convinced that I am not all here to begin with. Love it! Well done.

Hey Inkz.... You did Kim's challenge really well... sounds like a serene place when you can achieve such bliss in your life.... The use of sleep, springs and swirls are good choices for the alliteration part of this form.. Best of luck in the contest..

Dearest Inky, your words "swirl" with the energy of dreams. This poem is poetic "bliss" with amazing images. I am carried away on their joyful waves of blue. Best wishes for the contest, sweet friend. Blessings of sweet, swirling dreams dressed in astral blue! Samzy~

And you deserve this and so much more Ink, bliss, blessings, beauty and best of everything life has to offer you !

….and you have captured me within the bliss you describe …. Loving being here with you dear Ink . Hugs, Susan :)

Dear Empress, You brought a true sense of peace in your Than-Bauk. It is a thought that I feel I could easily meditate on while in a mindful state. Thanks for bringing a little more peace into my life and something to contemplate. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

You captured the enigmatic mysteries of sleep and dreams with your expression and metaphor, IE

and in my sleep, astral springs weave blue swirls of bliss…!!! These lines hit hard like a mic drop!!! Damn!!! Such power emanating from such few short lines…papi u just now howto hit the right spot in the right way aeee … just absolutely gorgeous!!!

Wow just in few lines you have expressed so much