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Swirling Nebulas

swirling nebulas bridge to the edge of the world colored requiem

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/16/2011 12:16:00 AM

Can't believe I ever missed this little gem, Barbara. Love that last line!! and also I see congrats are in order!

Eiken Laan

Date: 3/29/2011 10:46:00 AM

Barbara, Wonderful haiku, congrats on your win.

Kash Poet

Date: 3/29/2011 9:24:00 AM

Excellent Haiku!Congrats Barbara on your win---kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/28/2011 1:04:00 PM

I remember this outstanding haiku...so glad to see in in the winner's circle!! Congratulations, Barbara!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/28/2011 12:46:00 PM

Congratulations on the tenth place win in the contest of Rick, Barabara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/28/2011 12:45:00 PM

I'm still marveling at the "colored requiem" line, dear LNC. Congratulations on your win in Rick's contest! Love, Carolyn

John Freeman

Date: 3/28/2011 12:23:00 PM

Congratulations Barbara on your tenth place win...excellent haiku!! Good to see you in the top ten. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/28/2011 12:02:00 PM

Congrats BGG on your top ten win in Rick's contest with this elegant entry luv.. enjoy another grand victory for an excellent write ...

Tahera Mannan

Date: 3/28/2011 7:54:00 AM

Super image BG. many congrats

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/28/2011 7:50:00 AM

Congratulations Barbara on your win in ^Rick Parise's contest "Haiku Beyond". Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/24/2011 9:33:00 AM

Oh my, dear LNC, we both focused on the "swirl" of the "nebulas." But your poem is far more provocative with the second and third lines. Awesome entry! Wishing you success. Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/24/2011 8:24:00 AM

oooo love that last line especially!! (Watched a special last night on PBS, that reminds me of your poem, and the picture of swirling nebulas!) Good luck, Barbara!

Stephen Parker

Date: 3/24/2011 7:02:00 AM

Nice job defining and combining the elements in Rick's picture! You nicely twined space and time! Good luck in the contest with this worthy entry.