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Swirling

On the mountain top Swirling mass of clouds below So like our lives

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 11/6/2009 4:04:00 PM
Nice Haiku Sara >> James
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Date: 11/6/2009 9:38:00 AM
OH yes.. so like our lives indeed.. thankxxx for this great haiku... u have a creative way with words, Sara, keep at it.. Linda-Marie..P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart" per HG
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Date: 11/6/2009 9:12:00 AM
Good one Sara, keep writing! Smile, so true. Love Light Patty
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Date: 11/6/2009 8:54:00 AM
sounds like abraham
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Date: 11/6/2009 4:16:00 AM
Well, you can say that again! Astute observation, Sara!
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