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Swipe In Vain

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mozzie squadron fleets roaring overhead in droves dive to ear in waves scream whining hisses so loud that my swipes beats my brains out

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/12/2021 10:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. What a creative/fun write. Bugs go away. Have a blessed day.....................

John Anderson
Date: 9/12/2021 11:23:00 AM

Thanks very much for your kind words

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/12/2021 4:38:00 AM

I was like “make it stop” when I listened to the audio…lol!! Love first line. I can feel the horror in lines that follow. Congratulations!

John Anderson
Date: 9/12/2021 11:24:00 AM

Thanks, Cheers

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/12/2021 3:31:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

John Anderson
Date: 9/12/2021 11:24:00 AM

All the best, Cheers

Eve Roper

Date: 9/11/2021 9:10:00 PM

Cutie write, John, congratulations on your win. :)

John Anderson
Date: 9/12/2021 11:24:00 AM

Nice - thanks

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 8/20/2021 6:23:00 PM

May they buzz you right into a win , John :)

John Anderson
Date: 8/20/2021 7:33:00 PM

Here's hoping. Cheers

Constance La France

Date: 8/20/2021 1:29:00 PM

John, good one for the contest, those nasty bugs, your audio made me laugh, I could see you with the fly swatter ~ Constance

John Anderson
Date: 8/20/2021 2:00:00 PM

Thanks, Cheers and best wishes