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Swinging On a Star

my guiding star; you
shine with beauty from afar
you become my  sweet 
"Honey"  in the  milky way
making all my dreams come true

Joseph May
7/24/12

romancetanka

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Sherese Gooden

Date: 8/2/2012 11:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Joe.

Kash Poet

Date: 8/1/2012 7:33:00 PM

Lovely tanka here Joseph!Congrats on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 7:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Swinging On a Star" contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/1/2012 5:59:00 PM

So sweet, Joseph! Congrats on your win!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2012 3:09:00 PM

Joseph congrats on your win...David

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/1/2012 7:50:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Joseph very nice this one xx

Olusegun Arowolo

Date: 8/1/2012 6:24:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Wonderful tanka,May.Nice going..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/1/2012 12:39:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/31/2012 11:47:00 PM

super cheers to you for this star-struck win, joseph!..:) huggs

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2012 8:11:00 PM

congrats Joseph on a top ten win for this marvelous starry entry luv..

Joseph May
Date: 7/31/2012 8:34:00 PM

thank you so much Linda...glad I was able to place

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/27/2012 8:27:00 AM

Returning to this one. I really like it.

Joseph May
Date: 7/27/2012 10:54:00 AM

thank you so much Andrea ...for those encouraging words

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/26/2012 8:18:00 PM

Great star gift for your honey...what a doozy! :) gwendolen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 7/26/2012 1:34:00 PM

ahh love! Light & Love

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/26/2012 6:29:00 AM

Thanks Joseph done it. xx

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 7/26/2012 6:23:00 AM

Nice.... well done no mail yet

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 7/25/2012 10:55:00 PM

Excellent Tanka Joseph!!! Great to be back and read your awesome work.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/24/2012 8:18:00 PM

Hi Joseph, this is a great tanka... it shines brighter than you know... twinkle twinkle ... and milky ways... love your poem..pd

Joseph May
Date: 7/25/2012 8:10:00 AM

thank you PD

Kim Merryman

Date: 7/24/2012 7:04:00 PM

Joseph, I like this romantic tanka. Best wishes in the contest. Love, KIm

Joseph May
Date: 7/24/2012 7:22:00 PM

thank you kim

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/24/2012 6:47:00 PM

This is very nice, Joseph. If it's for the contest, be sure to put quotes around the name of the person for whom you are gifting the star!

Joseph May
Date: 7/24/2012 7:22:00 PM

thank you Andrea

Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/24/2012 4:58:00 PM

Did and replied.

Joseph May
Date: 7/24/2012 6:43:00 PM

i did not receive it ...retry

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/24/2012 4:39:00 PM

Great work..I could just see a far away gallaxie..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by with the kind reviews of my work..Sara

Joseph May
Date: 7/24/2012 6:42:00 PM

thanks Sara

Sherese Gooden

Date: 7/24/2012 2:32:00 PM

Great Tanka.

Joseph May
Date: 7/24/2012 6:41:00 PM

thank you Sherese

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/24/2012 1:03:00 PM

Hope all your dreams come true Joseph, lovely poetry. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Joseph May
Date: 7/24/2012 6:41:00 PM

thank you Anne

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