Swimming in grief

I swim in the weight of what once was,
where your laughter rippled like sunlight on waves.
Now the tide pulls heavy, a silent hush,
as grief drags deep into shadowed caves.

Your touch—once the shore I reached with ease—
is now a ghost in the ebb and flow.
The water whispers in mournful pleas,
carrying echoes, I dare not let go.

Each stroke I take is a fight with time,
against currents carved in sorrow’s tide.
Yet love still lingers, soft, sublime,
a beacon that will not subside.

Though lost in the depths of what we were,
I swim to keep your memory near.
Love does not drown—it shifts, it stirs,
a tide that speaks your name so clear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025

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Goldsmith Avatar
March 28, 2025 at 10:58 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely yet sad write. Good memories are the best kind to have. Enjoy Them... Have a fun/blessed weekend as you write away...........
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:24 PM
So beautiful.
George Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 10:22 PM
"Love does not drown—it shifts, it stirs, a tide that speaks your name so clear." So very true. Jay Ji, your poem is so emotive and touches the very core of one's heart.
Andresen Avatar
March 26, 2025 at 12:33 PM
- The voice of longing and lovely dear memories, Jay :) - Never let them go :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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