Swimming in grief

I swim in the weight of what once was,
where your laughter rippled like sunlight on waves.
Now the tide pulls heavy, a silent hush,
as grief drags deep into shadowed caves.

Your touch—once the shore I reached with ease—
is now a ghost in the ebb and flow.
The water whispers in mournful pleas,
carrying echoes, I dare not let go.

Each stroke I take is a fight with time,
against currents carved in sorrow’s tide.
Yet love still lingers, soft, sublime,
a beacon that will not subside.

Though lost in the depths of what we were,
I swim to keep your memory near.
Love does not drown—it shifts, it stirs,
a tide that speaks your name so clear.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2025


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Date: 3/28/2025 10:58:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely yet sad write. Good memories are the best kind to have. Enjoy Them... Have a fun/blessed weekend as you write away...........
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Date: 3/26/2025 10:24:00 PM
So beautiful.
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Date: 3/26/2025 10:22:00 PM
"Love does not drown—it shifts, it stirs, a tide that speaks your name so clear." So very true. Jay Ji, your poem is so emotive and touches the very core of one's heart.
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Date: 3/26/2025 12:33:00 PM
- The voice of longing and lovely dear memories, Jay :) - Never let them go :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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