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Swimming in grief

I swim in the weight of what once was, where your laughter rippled like sunlight on waves. Now the tide pulls heavy, a silent hush, as grief drags deep into shadowed caves. Your touch—once the shore I reached with ease— is now a ghost in the ebb and flow. The water whispers in mournful pleas, carrying echoes, I dare not let go. Each stroke I take is a fight with time, against currents carved in sorrow’s tide. Yet love still lingers, soft, sublime, a beacon that will not subside. Though lost in the depths of what we were, I swim to keep your memory near. Love does not drown—it shifts, it stirs, a tide that speaks your name so clear.

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Date: 3/28/2025 10:58:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your lovely yet sad write. Good memories are the best kind to have. Enjoy Them... Have a fun/blessed weekend as you write away...........
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Date: 3/26/2025 10:24:00 PM
So beautiful.
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Date: 3/26/2025 10:22:00 PM
"Love does not drown—it shifts, it stirs, a tide that speaks your name so clear." So very true. Jay Ji, your poem is so emotive and touches the very core of one's heart.
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Date: 3/26/2025 12:33:00 PM
- The voice of longing and lovely dear memories, Jay :) - Never let them go :) - Best wishes :) - hugs
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