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Swim Till Death--Kash--Monku

Your eyes reflect what I see, your lips always speak of me, we are flooded by love sea-- swim till death,lady! ==================== Placement: 6th; (March 2011) Contest:Magnet Marvel Sponsor:Linda-Marie The Sweetheart By:kashinath karmakar (8th March 2011)

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/8/2013 6:16:00 PM

Kash, start digging up all those faves I gave you and put a really good one into my contest!! LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2011 10:47:00 PM

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/14/2011 5:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit

Date: 3/13/2011 6:46:00 PM

Congratulations on winning in the contest. I can see why Linda liked this one.

John Freeman

Date: 3/13/2011 1:23:00 PM

Great to see you at the top Kashinath with this honorable win in sixth place. Congratulations on your honored win. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/12/2011 1:23:00 PM

Ah Kash, so great to read this one again.. Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;) you had me smiling again

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/11/2011 11:45:00 PM

enjoyed this first time of seeing, glad it has done so well, congrats. Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/11/2011 10:24:00 PM

Congratulations, you well deserved to be here on the list!

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/11/2011 7:50:00 PM

Great way to go. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/11/2011 6:51:00 PM

Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/11/2011 4:08:00 PM

Congratulations ...Sara

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 3/11/2011 3:37:00 PM

I love this!!!! Congrats my poet friend...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/11/2011 3:00:00 PM

Congrats Kashinath on your success in my magnet contest ... with these stunning words.. thankxx for your constant support...

Wandering Butterfly

Date: 3/9/2011 12:04:00 PM

so calming, gorgeous write kash...

Wilma Neels

Date: 3/9/2011 10:55:00 AM

OMW Kash, I love yours, you made me smile once again tonight.. I had to laugh at your comment as well.. Thanks for that :) Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/9/2011 7:01:00 AM

thankxx for supporting my current contest Kashinath .. good luck... reading fully as judging time draws closer luv.. am sure will be super amazed as always ...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/8/2011 11:55:00 PM

BEAUTIFUL, KAshinath. Love that symbolism of the love sea! and the first line so romantic!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 3/8/2011 3:32:00 PM

Nice pair you seem to be, Shiv-Parvati, kashinath

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/8/2011 1:06:00 PM

Interesting romantic work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 3/8/2011 1:04:00 PM

What could be better than swimming in the sea of love? Beautifully written, Kashinath. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/8/2011 6:29:00 AM

What a wonderful message, this is so good. Harry

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/8/2011 4:52:00 AM

oh cutie-pie, kashi! i enjoyed the wavy feel of this one.. hope you can comment on my dodoitsu too.. best of luck in the contest! :) huggs, nette