Kash Poet Poet Dodoitsu

Swim Till Death--Kash--Monku

Your eyes reflect what I see,
your lips always speak of me,
we are flooded by love sea--
swim till death,lady!





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Placement: 6th; (March 2011)

Contest:Magnet Marvel

Sponsor:Linda-Marie The Sweetheart

By:kashinath karmakar (8th March 2011)

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Andrea Dietrich April 8, 2013 at 6:16 PM Kash, start digging up all those faves I gave you and put a really good one into my contest!! LUv, Andrea

Andrea Dietrich March 17, 2011 at 10:47 PM soupmail

Carol Sunshine Brown March 14, 2011 at 5:40 AM Congratulations on your win Kashinath in Linda-Marie's contest "Magnet Marvel". Love, Carol

Robert Pettit March 13, 2011 at 6:46 PM Congratulations on winning in the contest. I can see why Linda liked this one.

John Freeman March 13, 2011 at 1:23 PM Great to see you at the top Kashinath with this honorable win in sixth place. Congratulations on your honored win. Agape, Moses

Wilma Neels March 12, 2011 at 1:23 PM Ah Kash, so great to read this one again.. Congratulations on your win in Linda's contest ;) you had me smiling again

Harry Horsman March 11, 2011 at 11:45 PM enjoyed this first time of seeing, glad it has done so well, congrats. Harry

Andrea Dietrich March 11, 2011 at 10:24 PM Congratulations, you well deserved to be here on the list!

Joyce Johnson March 11, 2011 at 7:50 PM Great way to go. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta March 11, 2011 at 6:51 PM Congratulations on the sixth place win in the contest of Linda, kashinath

Sara Kendrick March 11, 2011 at 4:08 PM Congratulations ...Sara

Michael J. Falotico March 11, 2011 at 3:37 PM I love this!!!! Congrats my poet friend...

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 11, 2011 at 3:00 PM Congrats Kashinath on your success in my magnet contest ... with these stunning words.. thankxx for your constant support...

Wandering Butterfly March 9, 2011 at 12:04 PM so calming, gorgeous write kash...

Wilma Neels March 9, 2011 at 10:55 AM OMW Kash, I love yours, you made me smile once again tonight.. I had to laugh at your comment as well.. Thanks for that :) Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart March 9, 2011 at 7:01 AM thankxx for supporting my current contest Kashinath .. good luck... reading fully as judging time draws closer luv.. am sure will be super amazed as always ...

Andrea Dietrich March 8, 2011 at 11:55 PM BEAUTIFUL, KAshinath. Love that symbolism of the love sea! and the first line so romantic!

Dr.Ram Mehta March 8, 2011 at 3:32 PM Nice pair you seem to be, Shiv-Parvati, kashinath

Sara Kendrick March 8, 2011 at 1:06 PM Interesting romantic work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Your presence is always uplifting..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire March 8, 2011 at 1:04 PM What could be better than swimming in the sea of love? Beautifully written, Kashinath. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Harry Horsman March 8, 2011 at 6:29 AM What a wonderful message, this is so good. Harry

Nette Onclaud March 8, 2011 at 4:52 AM oh cutie-pie, kashi! i enjoyed the wavy feel of this one.. hope you can comment on my dodoitsu too.. best of luck in the contest! :) huggs, nette