Sweets For the Sweet

There’s a nip in the air and it’s time to be scary
as goblins and gremlins abound;
monsters, the un-dead, in hideous costumes
who stumble, yet don’t make a sound.

But Hannah and he went as Arthur and Guinevere, 
friends ever since second grade,
thinking that they would get oodles of loot
for the lovable couple they made.

Appealing to parents, romantics at heart,
who had suffered too much from the gore,
they were stately and regal, dressed up to the nines,
representing two sweethearts of yore.

Judging by weight, and the shape of their booty, 
they got way far more than their share,
jack o’ lanterns were sputtering, sparklers died out
as they strolled, hand in hand, through the square.

Sifting through carefully, sorting their stuff, 
he was looking for two Hershey’s Kisses,
he found two in bottom, beneath a crushed Kit-Kat,
an omen, a moment of bliss.

They ate them in silence as he walked her home
‘neath the oak trees on Old Orchard Grove,
on that cold Autumn night as he kissed her just right
they felt warmth, the first inkling of love!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
October 12, 2012 at 6:23 AM
I am so thrilled to be able to read some of your amazing poetry today Keith. I hope you have a wonderful weekend. I will be back another day to read through more of your poetry. Love, Carol
Mac Donald Avatar
February 22, 2011 at 7:06 AM
Hi Keith! Robert is right, you hadn't lost your "golden poetic touch". This is as sweet as the "two Hershey's Kisses". Hope all's well with you and yours. Wishing you the best, Mikki
Pettit Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 2:39 PM
Keith, you have not lost your golden poetic touch. This is as impressive as the entries I remember reading on the old blue site a few years ago.
Gorelick Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 7:18 AM
It is so good to see your name pop up..glad to have you back..Ive missed your work..glad you found your inspiration in two Hershey's Kisses. lol.BG
Loving Iii Avatar
December 18, 2010 at 4:50 AM
who says time travel isnt posible. i just went back two months. whos Tylor?
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December 17, 2010 at 9:00 PM
I thoroughly enjoyed your poem! Great job! It was riveting, I enjoyed the mood: it made me say aww. The only critique I have is of your last stanza. It feels forced amidst the flow of verses and rhymes. Other than that, the poem is great!
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