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Sweetness

Sweetness what does that mean Singing birds just to me Sugar in my coffee Sunny days with blue skies Sweet dreams of you tonight Sunflowers all in bloom Sweet potatoes with meat Date Written:4/20/2021 4 Place 6 Syllables Pleiades S Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kim Merryman

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Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/27/2021 3:02:00 PM

Hello Paula, I love everything you've highlighted. I might add a little cream with sugar spiked coffee. And you, dear poet, are sweetness too. Best wishes, Brian

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2021 9:06:00 AM

Thanks for your note. It was an honor to have a win. Glad you like my "S" write. Cream in my coffee would be wonderful. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/25/2021 2:36:00 PM

I like how you used different items to portray sweetness! Congrats on your win, Paula! Blessings, Kim M

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2021 8:35:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. It was an honor to have a win in your wonderful contest. It was fun and sweet to write. Glad you like my "S" write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Gershon Wolf

Date: 4/24/2021 7:35:00 PM

Such sweet images, Paula! Every one! Congrats on your placement in Kim's contest. Peace, Gershon

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2021 8:31:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your congratulations. Glad you like my "S" write. Have a blessed day writing away.................

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 4/20/2021 8:04:00 PM

This is sweet and succinct; good luck in the contest Paula.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/21/2021 8:02:00 AM

Thanks for your note and for your good luck. Glad you like my sweet and succinct "S" write. Have a blessed day.............

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/20/2021 5:59:00 PM

Charming poem, Paula ~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/21/2021 1:08:00 PM

Thanks for your note. Glad you like my fun "S" write. Have a blessed day.............