Sweetness - Rictameter

Sweetness
                Perfume, Flowers 
             A Gentle Rain-Shower  
        Candy Kisses, Chocolate Hour  
Spring Breezes, Sheltered Cover, Leafy Bower 
      The Sloping Curves of Your Profile 
          Tempting Lips that Beguile
               Love's Tender Smile
                                             Sweetness

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Date: 9/29/2018 10:49:00 PM
Beautiful, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/30/2018 1:03:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line. :) gw
Date: 8/30/2018 4:56:00 AM
Please accept my belated congratulations on your well deserved POTD Gershon, a joy to read. :))
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2018 1:19:00 PM
--only if you are willing to accept my belated response to your visit. Thank you, Roy! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/28/2018 2:50:00 AM
So much sweetness in so few words. Congratulations!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 9/2/2018 1:17:00 PM
Thank you, Gail! ~ gw
Date: 8/27/2018 3:16:00 PM
How lovely this is Gershon! Congratulations on your deserving POTD!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/27/2018 4:41:00 PM
Much appreciated, Connie! ~ Gershon
Date: 8/26/2018 10:22:00 PM
Returning with congratulations, Gershon, for your well deserved recognition with POTD honors for your beautiful poem. Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Date: 8/26/2018 6:12:00 PM
The WolfMeter... Congratulations...All the best my friend...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 6:17:00 PM
O, Arturo! The WolfMeter is an immediate entry into the Comment of the Year contest! Thank you sooooo much! Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/26/2018 10:41:00 AM
Leaves the reader smiling:) Congratulations on POTD, Gershon.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:32:00 PM
And smiles are certainly a good thing! Thank you, Daniel. ~ Gershon
Date: 8/26/2018 10:17:00 AM
Big, Big congratulations, my friend, on your well-deserved POTD! This poem sparkles with the beauty of love and sweet romance! Such sweetness! Love and hugs. Pandita
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:31:00 PM
Thank you for your generous evaluation. Best wishes always, Gershon
Date: 8/26/2018 9:39:00 AM
Congrats on your POTD, Gershon. Well done.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:31:00 PM
Thank YOU, Warren! ~ gw
Date: 8/26/2018 8:17:00 AM
what a sweet poem GW many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:30:00 PM
Thank you for checking this one out and for your comment, Jan! ~ gw
Date: 8/26/2018 7:10:00 AM
Gershon, congrats on POTD for this wonderfully written poem. It should do well in the contest. John
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:30:00 PM
Appreciate your encouragement, John. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/26/2018 7:03:00 AM
Wonderful sweet piece, congratulations for POTD honors Gershon, well done...
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:29:00 PM
Charlie, thank you for weighing in on this one. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/26/2018 6:47:00 AM
Sweetness! You this time, not the poem, ;) congratulations on POTD! Didn't say last time, brings bowerbird to mind- I see a 'bower'. Have a lovely day Gershon! xomo
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Date: 8/26/2018 6:43:00 AM
Congrats Gershon, on poem of the day.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:29:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay.
Date: 8/26/2018 4:59:00 AM
An unusual form Gershon, good luck and congratulations on POTD. Greetings from sunny Florida. Tom
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:29:00 PM
Thank you, Tom. Greetings returned from sunny, sweltering Chicago. ~ Gershon
Date: 8/26/2018 3:30:00 AM
Congrats!!! on your POTD!, Gershon...a sweet rictameter my friend...love & light...^WW^
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:28:00 PM
Thank you for checking it out! ~ Gershon
Date: 8/25/2018 8:43:00 AM
A most interesting form and lovely feeling.
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2018 9:24:00 PM
Thank you, Richard! ~ Gershon
Date: 8/24/2018 8:38:00 PM
Oh your poem is so luscious, Gershon.. sweet, romantic, tender and a fav! Warmest wishes always my friend.. ~Susan
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/26/2018 1:27:00 PM
Thank you for your generous evaluation of this little number, Susan. Much appreciated. Best wishes, Gershon
Date: 8/24/2018 7:14:00 PM
Sweetness indeed! Never seen this form before. Yummy fun :) xomo!
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Gershon Wolf
Date: 8/25/2018 9:23:00 PM
It's actually for a contest, "Rictameter me." Check it out! And thanks weighing in, Maureen. ~ gw
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