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Sweetest Sin 20 Word Haiku

shes as beautiful as sweetest sin wicked as any girl has ever been dirty girl with the naughty naughty nightie

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Date: 10/10/2014 2:07:00 PM
Well, I don't think we can make it a haiku, but it sure is a great piece. I love the rhymes and the alliteration. BG
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Date: 10/10/2014 11:57:00 AM
Lovely alliterative write, mark
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Date: 10/10/2014 6:01:00 AM
Tracing sweetness in sin.....long thought.
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Date: 10/10/2014 5:39:00 AM
lol loved the humour and the alliteration:-) hugs jan xx
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