Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser Poet Verse

Sweetest Scandal

SWEETEST SCANDAL

one sunny smiley day 
on a busy highway
mr. CADBURRY meets
sweet HERSHEYS
without TRACKER
in MARATHON
they take their "SNICKERS"
going to M&M's hideout
they share
COMBOS of hugs and KISSES
with BUTTERFINGER on hand
and juicy TOOTSIE ROLL
together they rock an roll
brighter than MARS
better even than MILKY WAY GALAXY
reaching peak of CLOUD 9
after nine solid months
GOODNESS KNOWS
there are CELEBRATIONS 
and KUDOS
cause BABY RUTH comes out
saying
Chocolates please!
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***Sponsor	Carol Eastman
Contest Name	Story Poem Contest 
~~1st Place~~


OLIVE ELOISA GUILLERMO
1:14 am, May 08, 2014

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James Fraser July 20, 2015 at 12:12 PM Hey little one, many congratulations on your win in the "Story" contest, warm hugs//James xxx

Richard Lamoureux July 16, 2015 at 7:04 PM This was sweet fun! Congrats.

Elaine George July 15, 2015 at 4:09 PM Very creative, Elosia. Elaine

Alexis Y. July 14, 2015 at 8:40 PM Olive,you penned a clever piece. What a sweet write. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Eve Roper July 14, 2015 at 10:21 AM Haha... a wonderland of chocolate to bath in Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Poet Destroyer A July 14, 2015 at 2:03 AM Hi Olive, Congrats in Carol's story poem win. always ~~ LINDA ~~

Skat A July 14, 2015 at 12:16 AM Olive, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT

Jan Allison July 13, 2015 at 1:36 PM great to read this sweet treat again - congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Deborah Shiells May 12, 2014 at 9:23 AM Hi Olive, This was the sweetest of the sweets:-) This is my kinda read. Thank you for this wonderful write my friend. Thanks for sharing with us here. Peace, Deborah Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser July 15, 2015 at 8:03 PM Hi Deborah, I thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.. =")!

Paul Callus May 9, 2014 at 4:30 PM Olive_eloi, glad you managed to retrieve this beauty from the depths of your mind:) ...by the way....any dark chocolate around!!! :) // paul Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 9, 2014 at 4:41 PM Weee I have Paul kisses and patchi as they are my favorites..:) weeee join me in three bars not much as for the teeth..:) :P

Nette Onclaud May 8, 2014 at 1:56 PM sweet concoction with remarkable personification, olive...ang tamis!.. huggs Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 8, 2014 at 5:20 PM hahahha thanks much Nette I appreciate your comment.. :)

Jake Ponce May 8, 2014 at 12:48 AM My teeth hurt right after this sugary explosion. I could almost imagine you in Willy Wonka's attire, conjuring treats in your fancy little factory or the witch's house in Hansel and Gretel. Yummy write, Olive! Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 8, 2014 at 6:13 AM Thank you so much Jake I appreciate the comments.. :)

Tim Smith May 7, 2014 at 7:00 PM Yes mmmm candy...Loved this one...hugs Tim Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 8, 2014 at 6:14 AM thank you so much Tim.. :)

Jan Allison May 7, 2014 at 5:44 PM A lot of chocolate bars i don't know here - wish i did lol Hugs Jan xx Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 6:28 PM Thanks Jan.. :) GBU sweets.. :)

Casarah Nance May 7, 2014 at 5:37 PM I remember reading this before. Good that you put it back it was very creative, and made me hungry ;-) Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser May 7, 2014 at 6:26 PM Thanks Casarah.. :) God bless you.. :)