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for Mohan Chutani's Lets Minichu On Fulfilment Poetry Contest

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Sweetest Dreams Realized

Sweetest Dreams Realized

Sweetest dreams realized.
How awesome to receive in life before I’ve died
gifts most prized.

Gladness I feel -
to be like a child wide-eyed
with zeal.

The best
is my life’s ride:
blessed.

Sweetest dreams realized
to be just like a child, wide-eyed -
blessed!
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Woods Avatar
October 26, 2024 at 9:50 AM
So beautiful! Blessed indeed! Xo
Seeker Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 6:45 PM
Beautiful and enchanting! Congratulations on your win, Andrea
Famuyiwa Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 12:05 PM
Congratulations.
Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 10:41 AM
Oh so sweet, and blessed. Congratulations Andrea! :)
George Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 11:03 PM
Congratulations dear Andrea on your win. You are adept in every poetic form.
mysore Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 3:02 AM
congratulations on your 'minichu' contest win dear poet. cheers.
Dietrich Avatar
October 22, 2024 at 8:45 AM
wow, I got my first minichu win! thanks, Thriveni
Proxenos Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 10:44 PM
Hi Andrea, yes it is lovely such dreams make us happy, happy to be able to realize, accept and interpret them and how happy you were as a bright eyed child - the great thing is that it was the best of your life, but sad we cannot return to it but oh Wow I sense the nostalgia in you. Wonderfully penned dear Friend . Love and hugs, Jennifer.
Tor Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 6:21 PM
That is a sweet dream Andrea. Thank you for sharing.
Hind Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 4:56 PM
Aw, I liked your Minichu! A beautiful and memorable piece....<3
Bayles Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 7:28 AM
Very nice. This poem is filled with delight and good rhyme.
Williams Avatar
October 9, 2024 at 12:49 AM
Beautiful Andrea, I love the tinkle of children's laughter and their innocent exuberance of life and watch and admire them with not a care in the world and thankfully oblivious to the chaotic world around us. Oh! to keep their gift through life. All the best in your contest. Hugs Maria
Narain Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 11:54 AM
Sweet dreams coming true. A heavenly gift Well penned.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 1:09 PM
thanks, Jay.
Richards Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 11:33 AM
The innocents of children are to be admired - they easily befriend people and take life at face value. Nice poem on sweet dreams realized, Andrea. X
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 1:08 PM
Thanks, Suzette.
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 7:56 AM
Sweetest dreams realized is a wonderful moment to realize. You give such great examples here Andrea. I can relate although I am not a child. Best wishes for the Contest. Hugs...
Dietrich Avatar
October 10, 2024 at 1:25 PM
then again. I think of some years before I got kicked down by Prolia and those were some very happy times!
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 7:31 PM
I agree Andrea, we are happiest when we are kids..
Tor Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 7:30 PM
Yes we are happiest when we are kids. Agree Dear.
Dietrich Avatar
October 8, 2024 at 1:08 PM
the child line was a similie, Michael. It's awesome to be happy like when we were kids, don't you think?
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