Sweeter the Juice

Sweet,
bitter,
or in between.
Maybe a little of both.
Jeckle and hyde,
or more like 
Jacklyn and Hilda,
split personalities,
I love em all,
big or small
red hair and all.

Women,
girls,
I love em all,
Mostly in between.
See,
I'm at twenty six,
fixed, 
on older women
above age twenty three.
To me,
these are the ripening years,
when girls become women.
When what they want become
natural as spring water.

I have 
tasted the juices
of many vintages.
Like a ripened wine.
Like a grape, 
turned from sour to sweet.
like a mango mixed delicately 
with a peach.
Older, mature woman
are what I fancy.
I compare to an exquisite 
Cabernet,
Or 
like the Martini's I drink dry.
Why do I like older women?
Why?

I have tried,
experimented with youth,
only to find an 
abundance of 
drama queen 
feelings. 
Wild emotions that flare
with each conversation,
with each vacation
I take to the pub,
or to the club.

Each accusation
is followed by my 
truth.
Still,
she'll explode.
I then realize it is her 
youth.
I love em all though,
all shapes, sizes 
and creeds.
To satisfy my hunger,
to satisfy my needs.

Most times 
I like my coffee black
sugar sweet
no cream.
I mix my 
vanilla cappuccino,
her milk frothed
until she steams.

I think back,
remember,
this woman age 
thirty nine.
She must have had the 
ingredient to the fountain of youth.
In truth,
a pure "dime".
A dime piece, 
slang,
for a magnificent woman,
a stunning woman.
She would take me to 
unexpected feelings, places
buried deep inside my mind.
she was kind!
This beautiful woman,
age thirty nine....

Jared Pickett
4/28/07
Asavvy1
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 1/22/2010 4:45:00 AM
Well, Jared we know what you like and what you've seen and experienced, thanks for schooling us on the soup! Superb write!
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Date: 1/19/2010 1:56:00 AM
Hum, Jared. The passion of youth, captivates. You have written it well in these words. Sadly, though too often many YOUNG women lose self-respect when seduced expecting true love only to find indifference instead. (Not that that is what they found in you... I'm just speaking generally, here.) So, it is good that you moved on to an older and more promiscuous type to satisfy your needs. And then, there is true love... A real lifetime adventure!!! Keep writing! Smiles, Dane Ann (The mama! LOL)
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Date: 1/14/2010 3:23:00 PM
Jared, this is quite the literary endeavor! I used to like older thirty nine year old women too but somehow they tricked me cause now they're all younger than me! Keep an eye on em,-Robert
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Date: 1/14/2010 8:00:00 AM
Good one!!! but I have to say age is a mental thing =) but i'm young so i would.
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Date: 1/13/2010 7:50:00 PM
Nice write Jared. Thanks for sharing Man. Sincerely Moses
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Date: 1/12/2010 7:35:00 PM
Your words have mucho truth in them and who knows u better than u?... for all your experience and experiments.. still the Lone Wolf... the "right one" has not singed u as yet but when she does.. u will hang up your prowling ways and be content... thinking 39 is an "older woman" .. your youth is showing.. try 49 and then u will know what "prime and peak" moments truly are... my belt is full of notches and conquests.. the younger guys have it by a landslide in my opinion and experience.. luv to u
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Date: 1/12/2010 11:45:00 AM
Great poem. I like the way it flowed, too. Well written, awesome topic.Thanks for sharing
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Date: 1/12/2010 9:50:00 AM
Beautiful poem! Great imagery Jared. - edward
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Date: 1/11/2010 9:16:00 PM
Loved the flow of this piece, great work as always...Raul
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Date: 1/11/2010 6:29:00 PM
enjoyed reading today
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Date: 1/11/2010 8:28:00 AM
Beautiful women can come in all ages, Jared, and I love the way you acknowledge how people can get better with time. The first verse about Jeckyl and Hyde (Jacklyn and Hilda) really cracked me up. You seem to have a nice approach to relationships, wise beyond your 26 years. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/11/2010 5:27:00 AM
Was that 39 or 39 and holding. Keep the creative pen flowing. Thanks for the compliment to older women I guess. I appreciate your time spent reading my work. Sara
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