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Sweeter Goodbye

i deserved a sweeter goodbye one with less bruises more understanding less poison but what could i expect when your tongue is laced with it and your nails are sharp and the golf club has never left your hand

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Date: 1/28/2025 10:54:00 AM
Another great poem Lilly. Please keep them coming. You have a special talent.
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Date: 12/3/2024 7:26:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 11/30/2024 6:48:00 AM
Poignant, piercing, painful. A powerful write. Try Ho’oponopono if forgiveness issues are involved. God bless.
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