Sweeter Age

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I’m supposed to be pretty sweet~ however, I must have broken a few strings

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Hilda Greenhough

Date: 3/16/2025 7:13:00 AM

And Happy St. Patrick's Day.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/12/2025 7:33:00 AM

Great message stated succinctly. Yes, though there is good in us, we surely have faults~~we make mistakes. Janice

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 3/12/2025 7:40:00 AM

We do and as I age I am not so sweet. Thanks Janice

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 3/12/2025 5:00:00 AM

Hello Oliver, You made me smile this morning and just loved your monoku. So full of information! Spring Blessings, My Friend, Daniel

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 3/12/2025 6:24:00 AM

Thanks Dan. Glad you liked this.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/12/2025 4:06:00 AM

:) After all, we must become like the Velveteen Rabbit.

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 3/12/2025 4:21:00 AM

Yes we must. Thanks Kim

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/12/2025 3:59:00 AM

Lovely humour, Oliver:)

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 3/12/2025 4:21:00 AM

Thank you Joanna

Karen Jones

Date: 3/12/2025 12:19:00 AM

lol love this it is lighthearted and fun! If you don’t break a few strings you’re not doing it right

Oliver Mckeithan
Date: 3/12/2025 1:27:00 AM

Thank you Karen. Yes you are right and the older we get we break more.