Sweeten September

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Heavenly September is marvelous in its beauty, Unobtrusively stroking each trust is gratifying, Relentless daylight sprinkles alluring lewd duty, Exuberant sparkles of elation are truly mollifying, As auld relics fade, raw ones are soft as kid's booty. Written: September 17, 2022 Remember September Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2022 8:20:00 PM

Thanks for your participation in my contest, Lasaad. the first line says it all for me!! Congrats for your win.

Bill Baker

Date: 9/18/2022 9:20:00 AM

Very expressive with engaging imagery, Lasaad. I liked the beauty of the flower photo to match. Good luck in the contest! Bill

Sotto Poet
Date: 9/18/2022 2:54:00 PM

Bill, thank you so much. Your words are greatly appreciated. I'm glad you enjoy it. Blessings dear friend.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/18/2022 9:03:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive work you have penned in this one. Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Thanks for sharing and for visiting my page. Sara

Michael Tor

Date: 9/17/2022 4:30:00 PM

Lasaad such great imagery in your chosen words. The image was what you wrote. I think you will do very well in Andreas contest. She is an excellent judge with impeccable taste in Poetry...