Sweet Zephyrus - a Love Letter

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July 27, 2017

Oh Zephyrus, sweet Zephyrus, westerlies' bouquet nectarous lilac layered flirtations sail wings whimsical whiff my skin pale butterfly kisses generous.. music you breathe melodious chorus of wind-chimes feverous sounds, symphonic in gentle flail, oh Zephyrus.. hands breezy - touch me delicious flowers long-stemmed dance capricious exhales enchanting do prevail sighs satisfying without fail licks sweeping softly amorous, oh Zephyrus.

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Arturo Michael

Date: 1/2/2018 6:59:00 AM

Lots of rhythm and rhyme in this one...and of course passion...Happy New Year Susan... I want to do something different...So I will review and edit all I've done..then take a new direction...All the best to you and a big hug too

Susan Ashley
Date: 1/2/2018 5:10:00 PM

Oh my lovely friend.. Happy New Year to You!! Thank you for your wonderful appreciation of this write that is so beloved by me :) I hope the new year greeted you with a smile.. I review and re-edit my poems all the time - like a mother hen with her poetry chicks - always tending them :)) My warmest wishes and hugs to you as well mon ami.. ~Susan

Bernard Chan

Date: 12/18/2017 6:23:00 PM

Oh, what a lovely, lovingly rendered love letter to Zephyrus, Susan! That first stanza especially is art. Every time I trawl through your older peoms, I come up with a gem. Loved :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/18/2017 8:37:00 PM

Bernard, you have no idea how you have lit up my night and warmed my heart this snowy evening with your beautiful and shining comments. Your precious words mean so much to me. Thank you for 'trawling' (I love that word :) through my older poems and spending some time with this write which is so special to me.. you're a true blue poetry friend. Warmest wishes and happy holidays my friend ~Susan

Paul Callus

Date: 12/8/2017 2:01:00 PM

This reminds me of love letters of an other time and age, Susan, when writing such letters was an art in itself. There is such a mellow pastoral touch to these words. Should I, or any other man, be envious of Zephyrus! I'm surprised that not many have commented on this one! ~ Warm regards // paul

Susan Ashley
Date: 12/8/2017 3:51:00 PM

Your heartwarming words set my heart aglow and inspire a smile Paul. Your comments are beautiful and your visit is enchanting, as always. Thank you, my wonderful poetry friend, for your appreciation of my poem as I reflect appreciation for you and our friendship always. Warmest wishes ~Susan

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/28/2017 5:35:00 AM

Susan, this is wonderful! I also love lilac and that is a good line too. A definite favorite and pleasure to read this today. Thank you :)

Susan Ashley
Date: 7/28/2017 7:44:00 PM

Thank you Heidi for your read, your beautiful comment and for the fav. It was definitely a challenge to find rhymes to Zephyrus but the end result was worth the thought twisting turmoil lol! :)