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Sweet Tooth

Used on Poetry Soup 3/23/17 Sweet Tooth She always asks for candy, When we ask what she wants for her Day, Or on Christmas she asks for pralines, That come from far away. She never asks for diamonds, Nor an eco friendly mink; Only some kind of truffles, Or a gooey chocolate drink. Jelly beans by the handfuls, She keeps at her kitchen door, I’ll want that candy dish in her will, Just in case it fills some more. We all just call her Sweet Tooth, She never puts on any pounds, If she did, we’d love her just the same, For GrandMother is sweet as it sounds.

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Lynn Marie

Date: 3/31/2017 11:35:00 PM

Grandmother's are the best, they deserve every 'sweet treat' their hearts desire for all the 'sweetness' they give. You are a sweetheart to pen such a lovely poem sunlite :-) lynnxxx I have not used the word 'sweet' so much but you and Grandmother's are the exception :-)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 4/1/2017 11:08:00 AM

You're "sweet," Lynn Marie!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/28/2017 7:58:00 PM

this is so fantastic. I used to have a real sweet tooth as a child. Now I just want pizza and popcorn. A FAVE

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/30/2017 6:16:00 PM

I wonder how that happens? Anyway, thanks for your comment and the fave.

Jesse Zerlaut

Date: 3/28/2017 10:20:00 AM

lol this sounds a great deal like my wife. She loves her sweets! well wrote.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/30/2017 6:15:00 PM

Me, too, Jesse. Thank you.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 3/27/2017 2:24:00 PM

Lovely write, Sunlite! Janice

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/27/2017 4:27:00 PM

Thank you "sweetly" Janice!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/25/2017 8:44:00 AM

Lucky lady, I can look at candy and gain weight. I enjoyed this sweet treat.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/27/2017 4:26:00 PM

She only weighed 85 pounds and was blind, but in her house, she reigned.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 3/25/2017 6:25:00 AM

Good Morning Sunlite. There are no words to express such beauty in my eyes. I had the best grandmother ever. And yes, hold the candy dish close and dear. I too have such tokens from my grandmother that I see each day. Wonderful work in its entirety.

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/27/2017 4:25:00 PM

My little 85-lb grandmother was blind, but she could do anything in her own house. Thank you for your kindness.

Chris Green

Date: 3/24/2017 6:13:00 AM

This was cute and very sweet my friend. As I read and got to the last line the poem sunk in and felt really good to read. A sweet lady with an enormous sweet tooth. :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/24/2017 6:40:00 PM

Sometimes I get bogged down in serious stuff. I wanted to do something light. It helped me remember her and relive.

Darren White

Date: 3/24/2017 12:40:00 AM

This is so very endearing, what a lovely poem for a dear Grandmother :)

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/24/2017 6:38:00 PM

Thank you, Darren. She was dear.

Tim Smith

Date: 3/23/2017 7:11:00 PM

I think her family are her jewels and with candy she can share...very nice

Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/24/2017 6:37:00 PM

My little blind grandma is gone now, Tim, but she did love sweets - she even scooped sugar up in her hand from the sugar bowl. Mother had to watch her!!