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Sweet Tooth

Chocolate covered pretzels Chocolate toffee Chocolate covered cherries Chocolate almonds Chocolate truffles Chocolate Mmmm! *Note: Inspired by Laura's Sweet Treat Contest...

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Elizabeth Neal

Date: 3/24/2009 7:32:00 PM

Good luck in the contest and you made me want to snack. Love E.

Tyler Martin

Date: 3/23/2009 11:23:00 PM

Good luck in the contest, nice seclusion of chocolate. Tyler

Diane Christian

Date: 3/23/2009 3:00:00 AM

aww sweet chocolate, do uble mmmmmm chocolate strawberies mmmm a wonderful sweet write, thanks for your feed back on my poetry GOD BLESS FROM DIANE

Danielle Moreno

Date: 3/16/2009 7:30:00 PM

MMMMM THAT SOUNDS GOOD RAUL.......................................................DANIELLE

Joseph Spence Sr

Date: 3/15/2009 1:18:00 PM

I really like the flow of this listed Epulaeryu. I just had some dark chocolate myself. The box is right beside me. I like the taste. This one is right on point. Great job! ~Joseph

Daniel Neal

Date: 3/12/2009 2:46:00 PM

An ode to chocolate, nice epulaeryu. DN

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/8/2009 11:29:00 PM

Hello Amigo, this is another sweet one. Good luck. Ernilando

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 3/8/2009 2:35:00 PM

Dear Raul, I'm not sure YOU are playing fair I don't know to many women that YOU can't woo with Chocolate I think you will out do my Blintzs GOOD LUCK my Friend ALWAYS...HG

Chamonique Knowles

Date: 3/7/2009 9:08:00 PM

mmmmmmm ur making me hungry. chocolate is a amazing sweet lol nice little poem

Date: 3/7/2009 12:35:00 PM

You've got a smile out of me. Nice one! Good luck in the contest. Karen

Frank F. Atanacio

Date: 3/7/2009 8:59:00 AM

one word " SWEET "

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/6/2009 4:26:00 PM

This is different..I feel like I have a genetic defect..I dont like chocolate very much..but I do like this poem. BG

Robin L. Gass

Date: 3/6/2009 1:58:00 PM

Glad I stayed for desseret! Wonderfully sweet treat, aul! Good luck in the contest! Love, Robin

Brian Strand

Date: 3/6/2009 8:08:00 AM

Best wishes with this one Raul.Rgds Brian

Christopher Higgins

Date: 3/6/2009 4:58:00 AM

Love the chocolate theme throughout..this is different from all the others..best wishes.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/6/2009 4:57:00 AM

Ok mister, now you've done it. Yes indeed I could cover just about anything with that decadent sinful creation called chocolate! Totally and excruciatingly tempting and delicious! Well done! Love, Shar

Arany P.

Date: 3/6/2009 4:56:00 AM

yea... that gets a triple yum!! ~ Arany