Sweet Tooth

Chocolate covered pretzels Chocolate toffee Chocolate covered cherries Chocolate almonds Chocolate truffles Chocolate Mmmm! *Note: Inspired by Laura's Sweet Treat Contest...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Neal Avatar
March 24, 2009 at 7:32 PM
Good luck in the contest and you made me want to snack. Love E.
Martin Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 11:23 PM
Good luck in the contest, nice seclusion of chocolate. Tyler
Christian Avatar
March 23, 2009 at 3:00 AM
aww sweet chocolate, do uble mmmmmm chocolate strawberies mmmm a wonderful sweet write, thanks for your feed back on my poetry GOD BLESS FROM DIANE
Moreno Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 7:30 PM
MMMMM THAT SOUNDS GOOD RAUL.......................................................DANIELLE
Spence Sr Avatar
March 15, 2009 at 1:18 PM
I really like the flow of this listed Epulaeryu. I just had some dark chocolate myself. The box is right beside me. I like the taste. This one is right on point. Great job! ~Joseph
Neal Avatar
March 12, 2009 at 2:46 PM
An ode to chocolate, nice epulaeryu. DN
Tugaff Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 11:29 PM
Hello Amigo, this is another sweet one. Good luck. Ernilando
Esquire Avatar
March 8, 2009 at 2:35 PM
Dear Raul, I'm not sure YOU are playing fair I don't know to many women that YOU can't woo with Chocolate I think you will out do my Blintzs GOOD LUCK my Friend ALWAYS...HG
Knowles Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 9:08 PM
mmmmmmm ur making me hungry. chocolate is a amazing sweet lol nice little poem
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March 7, 2009 at 12:35 PM
You've got a smile out of me. Nice one! Good luck in the contest. Karen
Atanacio Avatar
March 7, 2009 at 8:59 AM
one word " SWEET "
Gorelick Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 4:26 PM
This is different..I feel like I have a genetic defect..I dont like chocolate very much..but I do like this poem. BG
Gass Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 1:58 PM
Glad I stayed for desseret! Wonderfully sweet treat, aul! Good luck in the contest! Love, Robin
Strand Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 8:08 AM
Best wishes with this one Raul.Rgds Brian
Higgins Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 4:58 AM
Love the chocolate theme throughout..this is different from all the others..best wishes.
Winter Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 4:57 AM
Ok mister, now you've done it. Yes indeed I could cover just about anything with that decadent sinful creation called chocolate! Totally and excruciatingly tempting and delicious! Well done! Love, Shar
P. Avatar
March 6, 2009 at 4:56 AM
yea... that gets a triple yum!! ~ Arany
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