Sweet to Die

If in thy love I meet my mortal end, how sweet to die,
Or if thy breath restores my soul, what joy draws nigh.

Thou art an ocean, vast with grace, I but a shell,
If one pure drop I taste of thee, all shall be well.

The morning breaks—if with true wine my cup thou fill,
This aged heart shall find renewal, freshened still.

Last night within thy arms I rested, calm, complete,
Today, though sated with thy loss, the pain is sweet.

I cannot from the corner of thy glance depart,
Yet if I hide from time awhile, it soothes my heart.

Each moment from thy love my thirsty soul is fed,
From such abundant grace I lift no restless head.

O friend! If union’s hand at last should draw me near,
Then exile’s wound was but compulsion I must bear.


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Explanatory Footnotes:

1. Aged heart - Refers to a heart worn by long years of love and longing, not merely old in age.


2. Wine - Symbolizes both earthly drink and mystical ecstasy, representing divine or passionate love.


3. Corner of thy glance - A fleeting, subtle look imbued with allure and deep meaning.


4. Sated with thy loss - The paradox of being overwhelmed by separation yet finding a strange sweetness in it.


5. Union and exile - “Union” refers to the joy of being with the beloved; “exile” conveys the torment of forced separation.

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