Sweet Surrender

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Leaning over as she lathers My long wavy-hair Rubbing my temples Softly telling me How much she cares Feeling the hot air of her Eager lips Blowing on my nape Kissing me gently I can't escape Her lavender scent the feeling much to great She presses on Oh give me more Please don't stop My hair standing up In delightfulness My lips trembling Her fullness enslaves me Sweet surrender my one and only love

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/17/2016 11:14:00 PM

Tonytocaa, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Jan Allison

Date: 4/20/2015 2:08:00 PM

oohh filled with so much passion Tony - wonderful write my friend:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx

Tonytocaa Camacho
Date: 4/20/2015 2:15:00 PM

Oh thank you jan,always supportive,blessings going your way,hugs tonytocaa