Tonytocaa Camacho Poet Light Verse

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Sweet Surrender

Leaning over as she lathers 
My long wavy-hair
Rubbing my temples 
Softly telling me
How much she cares 
Feeling the hot air of her 
Eager lips
Blowing on my nape
Kissing me gently 
I can't escape 
Her lavender scent
the feeling much to great
She presses on 
Oh give me more
Please don't stop
My hair standing up
In delightfulness
My lips trembling 
Her fullness enslaves me
Sweet surrender 
my one and only love

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Poet Destroyer A March 17, 2016 at 11:14 PM Tonytocaa, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Jan Allison April 20, 2015 at 2:08 PM oohh filled with so much passion Tony - wonderful write my friend:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx Tonytocaa Camacho April 20, 2015 at 2:15 PM Oh thank you jan,always supportive,blessings going your way,hugs tonytocaa