Sweet Sunrise

Great write, Harry. Good comparison. I love it :)

Congrats on your win in Francine's "Short and Sweet" contest Harry. Love, Carol

True. It's never partly sunny for the sun is a constant. Well done, Harry! Thanks for sharing and thank you for your comments on my poem. Happy New Year! Caroline.

Your words are so true. That sunrise for Faith is there and waiting, no matter how many storms we pass through. Take care. Janet

Re-reading this beauty. And I can see your point about a class society and the use of language! Let me see if I can find a poem of yours I have never read before.

Wonderful tanka! Keep up the excellent work and have a great 2012. Always, Laura

Makes me think of all the other things that have no explanation too Harry; and how special can that be. Maybe we know something some of the others don't!! :)

How did I miss this gem Harry ;) I really love your message in this one!! Hope 2012 will be a great year for you and thanks for the honor of being a favorite.. Love Wilma

love it- you know our God!

congrats on your win Harry, wonderful tanka

That is an excellent way to portray faith in God, Harry. Congratulations for your win with this well developed tanka!

So true. Congrats on your win, Harry! Love, Kim

Harry congratulations on your win.Love it.

This is so true...God shines through always. Congrats on the win.

Harry congrats on your win..David

Wise and thoughtful words. Congratulations Harry. Love, Joyce

yes !I agree with these beautiful wrds....whether it's cloudy or nt ...

Truth well spoken..Enjoyed reading..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

This is truly beautiful Harry! Also, check my latest blog-you won a yearend PS award voted by members of our site-It's a good one too :)

Beautiful and sweet Sunrise. It's true sweet Sunrise occurs perpetually, nice. Enjoyed it. bl

Nice write Harry. There is just one thing I've noticed that everybody else missed: You have six syllables in the first line which is one too many. The word "folk" appears expendable. Elimination of that word will bring the number of syllables in the first line down to five.

Good form and good write, Harry. Happy New Year. daver

Excellent point my friend. It reminds me of something I heard once about an athiest who said he has been to outer space but never seen God so He must not exist. Someone else answered him and said,"That's like an ant inthe States stickinng his head out of his hole in the ground and saying he sees no Khruschef so there must not be one." Don't know if that's how you spell that name but you get the idea. lol God Bless, JB

Hi Harry...this is a very well constructed tanka...God shows up every day, doesn't He? Love the theme and the delivery here...science is God's greatest disguise, huh? Gwendolen

Very well written Harry. OXOX hugs Anne-Lise