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Sweet Song Fir the Angels

I watch the clouds Curling in the sky Taking on new shapes Reflecting on my eyes. I smile, feel the wind, pass on through me, It's gonna take me away Carry me out to sea. You're laying next to me, You will not get up. I sit and pet your hair, Your eyes are shut. I wish they would open But you're far off gone. I wish you could see this, See my sweet song. Maybe if it's loud, And flys on up there, Maybe you can hear it, Where the angels sit and stare.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/28/2016 11:14:00 PM
Jennifer Bierbaum, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 8/11/2015 10:57:00 AM
Jennifer, enjoyed reading today.... SKAT
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Date: 2/17/2010 5:35:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jennifer. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/17/2010 1:07:00 AM
welcome to Poetrysoup, you'll like it here
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Date: 2/16/2010 7:42:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ...as this delight tonight.. luv Angels.. I am a collector... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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Date: 2/16/2010 7:37:00 PM
This was an most enjoyable read. Excellent write.
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