Sweet Song Fir the Angels

I watch the clouds
Curling in the sky
Taking on new shapes
Reflecting on my eyes.

I smile, feel the wind,
pass on through me,
It's gonna take me away
Carry me out to sea.

You're laying next to me,
You will not get up.
I sit and pet your hair,
Your eyes are shut.

I wish they would open
But you're far off gone.
I wish you could see this,
See my sweet song.

Maybe if it's loud,
And flys on up there,
Maybe you can hear it,
Where the angels sit and stare.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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March 28, 2016 at 11:14 PM
Jennifer Bierbaum, you've expressed yourself well, I like the last line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry when you have time. Love ~LINDA~
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August 11, 2015 at 10:57 AM
Jennifer, enjoyed reading today.... SKAT
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February 17, 2010 at 5:35 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Jennifer. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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February 17, 2010 at 1:07 AM
welcome to Poetrysoup, you'll like it here
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February 16, 2010 at 7:42 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all ...as this delight tonight.. luv Angels.. I am a collector... luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup
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February 16, 2010 at 7:37 PM
This was an most enjoyable read. Excellent write.
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