Sweet Silver Blue

Heart-warming wine
Jot down a line
Mood changes hue
To sweet silver blue

How high the cost
How much is lost
Back payment due
To sweet silver blue

Head shake and sigh
None left to deny
Insight in view
To sweet silver blue

Somehow I gain
Beauty from pain
As thoughts turn to you
To sweet silver blue
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Haight Avatar
October 9, 2016 at 3:28 PM
Another well-deserved Podium win for you, Tim! Congratulations! Sandra
Allison Avatar
September 17, 2016 at 1:53 PM
I don't have the blues after reading your lines Tim:-) many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 2:38 PM
Tim, congratulations on your podium win! Sandra
A  Avatar
September 16, 2016 at 9:34 AM
Awe, I can sing this all day long, TIMCongratulations on your awesome win. Stop by my blog "SEIZE THE DAY." Celebrate with me. WUV **SKAT**
Merryman Avatar
February 6, 2016 at 4:14 PM
Tim, Congrats on your fabulous 1st place win! Love, Kim
Delaney Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 8:09 PM
Congratulations on your winning poem. A unique insight into the theme. SuZ :-)
A   Avatar
February 5, 2016 at 12:44 AM
Congrats Tim, Love LINDA
Grammatico Avatar
January 30, 2016 at 5:35 AM
Congratulations, Tim. Well-deserved. Hypnotic rhythm.
Sietesantos Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 9:47 PM
Oh I love this silver blue - it's electrifying! Congratulations, dear Tim, on your awesome, top of the class win! Warmest regards and a 7! Pandita
Garg Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 5:31 AM
Very well penned, congratulations on your Ist place WIN......
George   Avatar
January 29, 2016 at 12:02 AM
So much conveyed in a color!!! A Kyrielle Masterpiece my friend. Many congrats on your FIRST PLACE win. Sincerely, Elaine
A. Sharma Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:29 PM
Lovely poem n win Tim.. congrats on ur top placement!
Simpson Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 1:28 PM
Nice!....Congrats on your win Tim.
Richards Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 11:59 AM
Hooray for you, my friend !!! Nicely done !!!
Gulley Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 10:22 AM
Congrats on your 1st place win, Tim. A wonderful read and write.....Sharon : )
Gentry Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 10:12 AM
Congratulations on your #1 win!
Haight Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:50 AM
Lovely, Tim. Congratulations on your top of the podium win! Sandra
A  Avatar
January 28, 2016 at 9:35 AM
Yup, it was and is the best in this contest. Thank you for sharing the sweet silver blue color. Tim, Congratulations on your awesome colored win. Drop by my blog " Character Sketch" if ya like. LOVE ** SKAT **
Johnson Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 6:59 PM
Your Sweet Silver blue is lovely and congratulations. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 9:09 PM
loving this one, such an awesome poem... it is~ xox~ LINDA
Jones Avatar
October 16, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Awesome!!!!!!! Congratulations you. :-)
A  Avatar
October 15, 2013 at 10:04 PM
Love this one TIM.. :) Congratulations! --LOVE-- ~SKAT~
A  Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 8:16 PM
:-), it's sweet. SKAT
A   Avatar
July 20, 2013 at 2:33 PM
Tim, thank you very much... hope you are well on this lovely day.... xox ~LINDA :-)
Ainsley Avatar
May 21, 2013 at 1:01 PM
Romantic at heart Tim I love it to;Your sweet silver blue.
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