Richard Palmer Poet Lyric

Sweet Sensation

Real love, don't act it,
Its cold,please hot it,
All yours, attack it,
Continue, don't stop it...

Thick,not thin,
Awwww,slide in,
Different positions,
360,rotating...

Open,when I stick,
Hard,like a brick,
Tock,when I tick,
Smooth,and slick...

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Funom Makama March 23, 2013 at 9:30 AM beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem! Richard Palmer March 25, 2013 at 3:37 PM thanks Funom,lol,enjoy to the fullest

Samantha Fryzel September 18, 2012 at 1:46 AM Not to much detail but still does the trick. lol : ) LUV~Sammie~ Richard Palmer September 21, 2012 at 3:55 PM thanks Sammie nuff luv

Carma Sanderson August 16, 2012 at 2:02 AM I dont know how I skipped this one, but damn" MY THOUGHTS EXACLLY...... Come n' get it lol Richard Palmer August 16, 2012 at 2:40 PM here I come,thanks much Carma Carma Sanderson August 16, 2012 at 2:03 AM EXACTLLY!!!

Dawn Mclaughlin June 18, 2012 at 4:48 PM Must say, you write it as it is, Richard Palmer June 19, 2012 at 3:08 PM yes I do,lol,thanks Dawn

Terry L. Allen June 7, 2012 at 12:25 PM oooooh naughty naughty island boy. The things you say be not for sleepin. I be thinkin this stimulate more than da mind. lol lol TLee Richard Palmer June 7, 2012 at 4:50 PM bite your lips,lol,thanks Terry

Nola Perez May 31, 2012 at 10:06 AM powerfully suggestive! And, thank you for commenting on my poem I validate! Nola Richard Palmer May 31, 2012 at 11:04 AM thanks Nola,I think reading should stimulate our minds....

Shaz Cheesman May 26, 2012 at 9:05 PM seductive and lyrical......sensual and hehehe....clever Richard! Richard Palmer May 27, 2012 at 3:30 PM thanks Shaz,aim to be

Aimee Garside May 25, 2012 at 5:36 PM A very sensual piece you have penned here. Well done on such a good write! Richard Palmer May 26, 2012 at 7:40 PM happy to get your sensual mind active,lol,thanks alot

Poet Destroyer A May 24, 2012 at 8:30 PM Weee! Full of passion.. lol.. wow... the image.. is...wowwwww..always..pd Richard Palmer May 26, 2012 at 7:38 PM thanks DP,Weeee

Anne-Lise Andresen May 23, 2012 at 10:58 AM Lovely poem and so sweet baby photo (love that baby....is the baby big now/is it you?) - Tick - tock from Anne-Lise Richard Palmer May 23, 2012 at 11:36 AM thanks Anne,no that's my son,my pic is posted now

Anthony Nutter May 23, 2012 at 6:57 AM Brings erotic visions to mind. Richard Palmer May 23, 2012 at 11:35 AM ha ha ,thanks Anthony

Keith Bickerstaffe May 22, 2012 at 6:22 PM What a cool piece! '...tock when I tick, smooth and slick,' hotly sensual, and a whole lotta fun! Peace, Richard. Richard Palmer May 23, 2012 at 11:33 AM peace,keith,happy you enjoyed

Cecilia Macfarlane May 22, 2012 at 7:47 AM Sizzling and seductive write....I like! Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:08 PM Thanks alot,Cecilia

Toquyen Harrell May 21, 2012 at 8:26 PM "What are you describing, Richard? Lol. Very cool. Thanks for visiting my site. I just posted the second one. Hope you enjoy it. Toquyen" Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:10 PM Close your eyes,bite your lips,you will figure it out,lol,i wll,thanks

Ivy Vresk May 21, 2012 at 1:57 PM Like your poem,you give just enough for start and then let it sizzle in readers mind,how brilliant,Ivy Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:11 PM thanks,Ivy

Lily Mayfield May 21, 2012 at 11:34 AM Damn, quite the hot poem you got here. Thank you for reading mine as well ;) -Lily <3 Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:12 PM liked yours just as much,thanks

Pace Ink-U-Script May 21, 2012 at 8:59 AM Lol!!! Wow, this is awesome!! Strictly for the ladies!! Thanks for stopping by....love the Jamaican slang Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:13 PM I love your poems and style,you got a fan,thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen May 21, 2012 at 7:12 AM Real love is hot...and so is this poem Richard. - oxox Anne-Lise Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:17 PM and passionate,thanks Anne

Wilma Neels May 21, 2012 at 6:57 AM hehe, now the people in the office are wondering why I am smiling.. :) enjoyed Richard Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:14 PM thanks hope to make u laugh a lot more,Wilma

Joy Wellington May 20, 2012 at 10:24 AM hmhmm!! Sweet sensation indeed!! I can see you are a lovaman...smile. Joy Wells Richard Palmer May 22, 2012 at 3:16 PM hi Joy thanks for reminding me,love your comments