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Sweet Sensation

Real love, don't act it, Its cold,please hot it, All yours, attack it, Continue, don't stop it... Thick,not thin, Awwww,slide in, Different positions, 360,rotating... Open,when I stick, Hard,like a brick, Tock,when I tick, Smooth,and slick...

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Funom Makama

Date: 3/23/2013 9:30:00 AM

beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

Richard Palmer
Date: 3/25/2013 3:37:00 PM

thanks Funom,lol,enjoy to the fullest

Samantha Fryzel

Date: 9/18/2012 1:46:00 AM

Not to much detail but still does the trick. lol : ) LUV~Sammie~

Richard Palmer
Date: 9/21/2012 3:55:00 PM

thanks Sammie nuff luv

Carma Sanderson

Date: 8/16/2012 2:02:00 AM

I dont know how I skipped this one, but damn" MY THOUGHTS EXACLLY...... Come n' get it lol

Richard Palmer
Date: 8/16/2012 2:40:00 PM

here I come,thanks much Carma

Carma Sanderson
Date: 8/16/2012 2:03:00 AM

EXACTLLY!!!

Dawn Mclaughlin

Date: 6/18/2012 4:48:00 PM

Must say, you write it as it is,

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/19/2012 3:08:00 PM

yes I do,lol,thanks Dawn

Terry L. Allen

Date: 6/7/2012 12:25:00 PM

oooooh naughty naughty island boy. The things you say be not for sleepin. I be thinkin this stimulate more than da mind. lol lol TLee

Richard Palmer
Date: 6/7/2012 4:50:00 PM

bite your lips,lol,thanks Terry

Nola Perez

Date: 5/31/2012 10:06:00 AM

powerfully suggestive! And, thank you for commenting on my poem I validate! Nola

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/31/2012 11:04:00 AM

thanks Nola,I think reading should stimulate our minds....

Shaz Cheesman

Date: 5/26/2012 9:05:00 PM

seductive and lyrical......sensual and hehehe....clever Richard!

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/27/2012 3:30:00 PM

thanks Shaz,aim to be

Aimee Garside

Date: 5/25/2012 5:36:00 PM

A very sensual piece you have penned here. Well done on such a good write!

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/26/2012 7:40:00 PM

happy to get your sensual mind active,lol,thanks alot

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/24/2012 8:30:00 PM

Weee! Full of passion.. lol.. wow... the image.. is...wowwwww..always..pd

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/26/2012 7:38:00 PM

thanks DP,Weeee

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/23/2012 10:58:00 AM

Lovely poem and so sweet baby photo (love that baby....is the baby big now/is it you?) - Tick - tock from Anne-Lise

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/23/2012 11:36:00 AM

thanks Anne,no that's my son,my pic is posted now

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/23/2012 6:57:00 AM

Brings erotic visions to mind.

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/23/2012 11:35:00 AM

ha ha ,thanks Anthony

Keith Bickerstaffe

Date: 5/22/2012 6:22:00 PM

What a cool piece! '...tock when I tick, smooth and slick,' hotly sensual, and a whole lotta fun! Peace, Richard.

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/23/2012 11:33:00 AM

peace,keith,happy you enjoyed

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/22/2012 7:47:00 AM

Sizzling and seductive write....I like!

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/22/2012 3:08:00 PM

Thanks alot,Cecilia

Toquyen Harrell

Date: 5/21/2012 8:26:00 PM

"What are you describing, Richard? Lol. Very cool. Thanks for visiting my site. I just posted the second one. Hope you enjoy it. Toquyen"

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/22/2012 3:10:00 PM

Close your eyes,bite your lips,you will figure it out,lol,i wll,thanks

Ivy Vresk

Date: 5/21/2012 1:57:00 PM

Like your poem,you give just enough for start and then let it sizzle in readers mind,how brilliant,Ivy

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/22/2012 3:11:00 PM

thanks,Ivy

Lily Mayfield

Date: 5/21/2012 11:34:00 AM

Damn, quite the hot poem you got here. Thank you for reading mine as well ;) -Lily <3

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/22/2012 3:12:00 PM

liked yours just as much,thanks

Pace Ink-U-Script

Date: 5/21/2012 8:59:00 AM

Lol!!! Wow, this is awesome!! Strictly for the ladies!! Thanks for stopping by....love the Jamaican slang

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/22/2012 3:13:00 PM

I love your poems and style,you got a fan,thanks

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/21/2012 7:12:00 AM

Real love is hot...and so is this poem Richard. - oxox Anne-Lise

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/22/2012 3:17:00 PM

and passionate,thanks Anne

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/21/2012 6:57:00 AM

hehe, now the people in the office are wondering why I am smiling.. :) enjoyed Richard

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/22/2012 3:14:00 PM

thanks hope to make u laugh a lot more,Wilma

Joy Wellington

Date: 5/20/2012 10:24:00 AM

hmhmm!! Sweet sensation indeed!! I can see you are a lovaman...smile. Joy Wells

Richard Palmer
Date: 5/22/2012 3:16:00 PM

hi Joy thanks for reminding me,love your comments