Sweet Rose

~"O my love, my wife!
Death, that hath suck'd the honey of thy breath
Hath had no power yet upon thy beauty."-

Oh, prithee wake and kiss thy husband dear;
Come hither, take my hand and pray arise;
If thou art flesh or spirit, thou art mine;
A plague then be on cursed fortunes vile;  
Thou lovest me no more; thou breathest, nay,
No more. Sweet rose, thou art wilted in full bloom;
And if thy bosom art forever stilled,
Then heaven bestill mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 8/20/2011 9:50:00 AM
This one is so romantic in the old English ...Enjoyed reading this morn..You need to write us more of these..Thanks for your faithfulness in stopping by..Sara
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Date: 7/12/2011 4:07:00 PM
WoW! This is so touching. So poignant. From one to seven I give it a 10. Truly great. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/11/2011 10:31:00 AM
a wonderful and well written piece of fine poetry. thank you for commenting on Memories of Woolworth's. I use to work next door to woolworth's at this Place called H.L. Green which was also a dime store chain as a stock boy. i made 90 cents an hour. I glad i brought back some memoires.
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Date: 7/7/2011 12:53:00 PM
Wow! Superb, Jack. I would swear Shakespearewrote this himself. Way to go, dear friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/7/2011 12:37:00 PM
magnificent piece Jack.. u did so wonderful with the word vernacular expected for the contest .. beautiful emotion ..good luck in the contest my friend..luv..
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Date: 7/7/2011 12:13:00 PM
Reads like a monumental classic! You truly extended your craft and creativity with beautiful verse in this stellar form! I tip my hat to you mate, excellent entry.
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Date: 7/7/2011 10:42:00 AM
What more could I ask for today? It is a beautiful day the sun shining and birds singing. Thank you for sharing your awesome poetry with us Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/7/2011 10:31:00 AM
Wonderful write here jack..very passionate one.Best wishes.
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Date: 7/7/2011 10:19:00 AM
that was truly beautiful, such a sweetly romantic piece
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