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Sweet Release

Hidden delights lie beneath
waiting for your gentle touch
Enticing a sweet release
together we climb

For the contest:  Spicey
Sponsored by:
Michael J. Falotico

Copyright © Paula Swanson | Year Posted 2011

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January 6, 2011 at 5:37 AM

Nice spicy and quite explicit in creating a picture of the theme you are writing on,paula. Soup mail!!!!

Constance La France

January 6, 2011 at 5:28 AM

Very sensual and "spicy" and somewhat full of sweet love, best of luck in the contest~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 5, 2011 at 7:53 PM

thankxx for supporting Michael's contest Paula.. we will be judging together so appreciate your constant support ...good luck with luv..

Doris Culverhouse

January 5, 2011 at 6:32 PM

well written!! Enjoyed reading your work today!

Carrie Richards

January 5, 2011 at 5:37 PM

Way to hot to touch .....:) !!!!! Good one !!

January 5, 2011 at 5:35 PM

Good one for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Sara

January 5, 2011 at 5:22 PM

Well this one is excellent!Spicy and sweet as well.

Poet Destroyer A

January 5, 2011 at 4:02 PM

Amazing Paula, enjoyed your sweet entry for M.j.F. contest.. Good luck,..p.d.

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