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Sweet Release

Hidden delights lie beneath waiting for your gentle touch Enticing a sweet release together we climb For the contest: Spicey Sponsored by: Michael J. Falotico

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Rick Parise

Date: 1/6/2011 8:40:00 PM

soupmail

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/6/2011 5:37:00 AM

Nice spicy and quite explicit in creating a picture of the theme you are writing on,paula. Soup mail!!!!

Constance La France

Date: 1/6/2011 5:28:00 AM

Very sensual and "spicy" and somewhat full of sweet love, best of luck in the contest~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/5/2011 7:53:00 PM

thankxx for supporting Michael's contest Paula.. we will be judging together so appreciate your constant support ...good luck with luv..

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 1/5/2011 6:32:00 PM

well written!! Enjoyed reading your work today!

Carrie Richards

Date: 1/5/2011 5:37:00 PM

Way to hot to touch .....:) !!!!! Good one !!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/5/2011 5:35:00 PM

Good one for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Good luck..Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 1/5/2011 5:22:00 PM

Well this one is excellent!Spicy and sweet as well.

Rick Parise

Date: 1/5/2011 4:43:00 PM

Very nice~love the last two lines ~ A top placement I betcha!!!!!!!Mark my words Paula!!!!God bless!!!~Rick

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/5/2011 4:02:00 PM

Amazing Paula, enjoyed your sweet entry for M.j.F. contest.. Good luck,..p.d.