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Sweet Release

Slowly, oh so slowly, with each labored breathe; the soul searches, searches for its rest. Searches for the sunshine, the slivered sound of rain; searches for the Universal roar, an ending to the pain. Searches for serenity, the gentle touch of love; searches for the shining Child, Grace from above. Now they live in memory with each passing breath the soul searches, searches for and finds It’s eternal rest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 1/9/2009 8:47:00 AM
Debbie , I have experienced this , on a few occasions , recently . I must say , you have tastefully captured the pain of accepting the inevitable .....
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