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Sweet Rapture

In a loving embrace, a moment in time frozen Etched in her mind as she wrapped loving arms around Drifting forever, in his tranquil eyes, blue as the sea His shallow breath fell upon her beautiful face His grasp clutched and this pulled her heart strings As arms entwined the lovers echoed a sigh Passion, emotions floating on a sea of bliss Rejoicing in sweet rapture, they kiss. 25/2/13

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Debbie Duncan

Date: 4/6/2013 12:08:00 AM

I'm back to read this gem again, I see from below you won with it as well ;} you must have put it in the contest after I read it the first. I'm glad I came back so I could say congrats ;} I thank you for reading Lilith Invoking, she was Adams first wife ;}

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2013 9:20:00 PM

PHYLLIS, ~ CONGRATULATIONS in FRANCINE'S lovely "SPRING IS IN THE AIR" contest. have yourself a nice and sweet smile on me...;-) LOL...xox~ PD

Stephan McBride

Date: 3/10/2013 12:25:00 AM

love it, your amazing, God bless and love ya

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/9/2013 4:08:00 PM

Ah Spring, I can't wait Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/9/2013 3:12:00 PM

((())) Congrats on your great win..Sara

Joseph May

Date: 3/8/2013 6:15:00 PM

congrats on your win Phyllis

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2013 3:40:00 PM

Beautiful poem Phyllis!Congrats on the win.

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/8/2013 8:16:00 AM

awwweee !! So romantic !!! I remember this...so many years ago. Congrats on your win !!

Donna Jones

Date: 3/8/2013 6:42:00 AM

Congratulations :-)

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/8/2013 12:00:00 AM

Congratulations, Phyllis. Sweetly done. Love, Joyce

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/7/2013 11:49:00 PM

congrats on your win in the contest Phyllis, a beautiful entry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/7/2013 4:54:00 PM

Hey, Lady, just stopping by to say HI

Carson Jones

Date: 3/7/2013 9:06:00 AM

i really enjoyed reading this! loved it like crazy like the people love each other in this poem...carson

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 3/6/2013 8:28:00 PM

Phyl, such emotion, I just didn't know where you were taking me and am sort of glad it stopped at the kiss! Anything might have happened but that would have been great. You show such restraint my dear and do a fine write on romance.

Jack Horne

Date: 3/6/2013 9:29:00 AM

this is so beautiful, my friend

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/4/2013 1:32:00 PM

Ahh!! Excellent romantic touch..Enjoyed reading..It brightened my day..Sara

Debbie Duncan

Date: 3/1/2013 1:21:00 PM

very nicely done Phyllis ;} thank you for reading my By The Sea ;}

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/1/2013 12:48:00 PM

yes, Phyllis, I can see what you mean about liking romantic poems. Just look what you have done here with this one!!! It's so lovely, my friend.

Jack Horne

Date: 2/28/2013 3:15:00 PM

what a beautiful write, Phyll - glad you're well and having fun with the grandchildren, my friend x

John Loving Iii

Date: 2/27/2013 10:33:00 AM

Heart strings? Do they tie up like latches?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/26/2013 5:02:00 PM

yes, the title of this one is well chosen because it describes a splendid rapturous moment!! Well done, my friend. And a big thanks to you for always supporting my FB page and my poetry. Luv, Andrea

Constance La France

Date: 2/26/2013 6:13:00 AM

Phyllis, this is amazing, so romantic and full of deep love, the kind of love each person wants, love it, constance