Sweet Quintain

Sweet Quintain, sing to me
of poetry and skies of azure blue;
of sea gulls flying free;
of dawn and morning’s dew
and sunshine as it falls with splendor on the sea.

Sweet Quintain, give to me a tune.
Let it be the song of birds
on a gentle day in June.
Let the melody have words
of a poet’s serenade to the golden moon.

Sweet Quintain, sing more serenades.
Sing with the wind’s soft susurration.
Be the breeze dancing through fields and glades.
Never let there be cessation
as water from mountains freshly cascades.

Sweet Quintain, sing in light of day
and serenade me too well past eventide.
Sing even when a cloudburst comes my way,
for beauties of nature everywhere reside.
Be rain or be a hurricane, but let your music stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Hind Avatar
September 28, 2025 at 7:55 PM
Lovely!! I love how you address this form like a person <3
Miller Avatar
August 3, 2023 at 12:56 AM
Very sweet, congratulations
Seeker Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 11:08 PM
A sweet serenade indeed ~ warmest congratulations on your trophy win, Andrea
Merryman Avatar
August 1, 2023 at 7:04 PM
A beautiful descriptive write, Andrea! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Delaney Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 3:18 PM
Congratulations Andrea: A lovely flowing Song to nature. Hugs, SuZ
Volumes Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Loved it. Well deserved 1st place Andrea, congratulatioins.
Allison Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 2:22 PM
what a sweet Pome Andrea, many congrats on your top placement:-) hugs Jan xx
Pinet Avatar
July 31, 2023 at 2:04 PM
Congratulations Andrea! Your fun poem earned you "First Place" in my contest. You should be proud of your placing, there were many good poems submitted, yet your poem rose above them to the top of the podium, well done my friend, Emile.
John Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 8:14 AM
Music in gentle rain or a hurricane - it can be very beautiful. Nice piece here, Andrea. (The like in should have mentioned to you by the way is the Dave Carrington prog, "Squaring the Circle". Yes, that's me at the top (ugly bugger, of course!) but in Dave's programme I do read that "Ballad of Reading Gaol" poem by Oscar Wilde. Slightly shorter version (about 18 minutes). If you can get to it, enjoy it. We're all fairly familiar with Oscar Wilde; I do rather like "Ballad".)
Narain Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 10:31 AM
I loved it, Nice poem.
Pandit Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 5:41 AM
Much enjoyed the rhythm of your poem, Andrea. Wonderful poem from your gifted pen.
Kendrick Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Ahh!! Very descriptive lines comparing a quintain to beauty in nature. The expressive lines penned exudes with the feelings of the poet. Reads like a good contender for a contest to me. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my pages. Sara
Ball Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 3:44 AM
Sweet indeed. Love this Andrea. I'm not much on form. Wish I was better at it but I do like the way this flows. Nice as usual. God Bless, JB
Ricci Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 3:41 AM
Good Morning Andrea. Hi. This is wonderfully written and executed. This entry defines poetry and poetic expressions in my eyes and mind. This is one of those entries that should be read out loud with emphasis and feeling. Truly. It was a pleasure turning to your page. Keep enjoying poetry. Thank you for sharing your talent. Blessings always (smile)
Manassian Avatar
July 26, 2023 at 1:03 AM
You always amaze with the fluidity of your write. Everything flows so well. Thank for teaching me a new word...susurration. ;)
Hinshaw Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 7:57 PM
Splendid and uplifting verse, Andrea! My kind of poetry - Bob H
Situation Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 7:25 PM
the science of the Quintain. You express it well with nature as you do here. Poetry can be work at times but when the muses go to work masterpieces are made.
Hawley Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 6:26 PM
Nice flow to the poem.
Daniel Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 5:53 PM
Personifying a poetry form, now that's a first! Brilliant song, Andrea:)
Rolland Avatar
July 25, 2023 at 4:04 PM
beautiful penning, i loved the inspiration and the poetry of words
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