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Sweet Penuche

With body and mind you respond to my touch,
gobbling up kisses, like sweet penuche,
I could not ask for a better lover; there is nonesuch.
When I grind my gears, you become my clutch
and I lean on you like an emotional crutch.

A magic elixir, you quench my heart
like sweet nectar, neither bitter nor tart.
Forged on passion's anvil, your lovemaking's an art. 
And paused on the moment, my smile presses restart.

Your granite body buffed to a sheen
has a vulnerable heart; you're not a machine.
And yet, you make the impossible look routine.

With rippled muscles, as though chiseled from stone,
you're a warm schnook where dreams have blown,

You're the wind in my sails, without uttering a sound.

Behind the scenes, you don't speak much,
but like dawn's first light, you offer a new start.
Cushioning my falls, you spot me on life's trampoline
and somewhere between estrogen and testosterone
you find balance, both feet firm on the ground.


(Minuanetta)


1/26/2018

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Reason A. Poteet Date: 4/6/2020 12:05:00 PM quite nice theme and a lovely form to boot. Well-done, Emile Pinet, with unique vocabulary and metaphor that appeals. A late congrats on your achievement. Login to Reply

Susan Gentry Date: 4/29/2018 2:49:00 PM Congratulations on your placement win with this delightful minuanetta full of imagery and humor. Well written and organized. I enjoyed. :) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 4/29/2018 3:55:00 PM Thank you Susan, I always enjoy your visits my friend, Emile.

Gregory Richard Barden Date: 4/29/2018 2:17:00 PM This was such an enjoyable and joyous, read, Emile, and it hooked me from start-to-finish! LOVE the saturation of imaginative metaphor and creative thought that went into its structure and rhyme, and the story itself is just plain fun! Superb write! Congratulations on your placement, and thank you for entering my contest! :-) Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 4/29/2018 2:21:00 PM Thank you so much Gregory, you honor me my friend, Emile.

Line Gauthier Date: 4/29/2018 8:12:00 AM A fun poem, Emile. Congrats on your win, my friend. Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 4/29/2018 10:16:00 AM Thanks Line, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Anna Hopper Date: 1/26/2018 8:54:00 PM I enjoyed this tribute! Best of luck! Login to Reply Emile Pinet Date: 1/27/2018 8:29:00 AM Thanks so much Anna, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

CayCay Jennings Date: 1/26/2018 3:59:00 PM So, we have the 'Barden' and it is an impressive form, me likes. The poem is great, Emile, a real grabber and holder that I enjoyed all the way through. I have to ask if you mean trampoline vs. tambourine? (that's the only thing I didn't get, could be me) You did his form proud, I'm sure he'll more than appreciate your effort - it does shine! Blessings ... CayCay Login to Reply