Sweet Peace

Emotions get the best of me
at times. I’ve felt betrayal’s bite;
the pain runs circles in my mind
and owns me. I’m too weak to fight.

When into this unhealthy mix
comes anger, I try mightily
to stem the tide. I say, “Enough!
Now of this torture, I’ll break free!”

Then long-past sins that God forgave
come taunting, robbing me of peace.
It will not come when, on my own,
I foolishly bid hauntings cease.

Attempts are ineffectual.
I can’t accomplish mind control.
The more I try, the worse I get.
I can’t fulfill the Father’s role!

True peace is found in Him alone,*
the kind that lasts. He’ll give me rest
and peaceful sleep if I but ask,
believing I’ll be truly blessed.


*Psalm 4:8   “In peace I will lie down and sleep, for you alone, LORD, make me dwell in safety.”





January 31, 2023
entered in the Finding Peace Poetry Contest    placed 10th
Sponsor: Regina McIntosh


April 14, 2023
entered in the Brian Strand Premiere Contest 1208
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Date: 2/8/2023 10:33:00 AM
Janice, congratulations on your win. Ps. 4 and Ps. 121 are two of my favorites for our God "never slumbers, never sleeps." Beautifully expressed. A universal experience for all of us. Blessings of sweet slumber to you!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/16/2023 4:36:00 PM
Sam, BLESS you for this response. Janice
Date: 2/5/2023 4:11:00 AM
Beautiful writing. I love it. Congrats on the top win. God bless you with peace. Love, Gina
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 2/5/2023 7:08:00 PM
Gina, thanks a million for sponsoring and for my win. Janice
Date: 1/31/2023 1:06:00 PM
Yes, the peace that lasts is found in Christ alone!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 1/31/2023 4:04:00 PM
Thanks so much, Kim. Janice
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