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Sweet Passion & Patience

Passion in the thick country air, heavy grey clouds in the midnight sky. The half moon light shining above, as the lightning illuminates with every kiss and every moan. Your strong arms embracing me, Your soft, warm hands caressing my bare skin, sending shivers down my spine. My heart pounding wildly at the thrill of our first time. My body aching for more with every thrust. Our love finally fulfilled in the heat of the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 7/5/2009 9:49:00 PM
this is so beauitful it remings me of home keep writing shaiteria
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Date: 7/5/2009 11:29:00 AM
A great title and great write. The poem flows smooth and really is just all around great work Ashley
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Date: 7/5/2009 8:25:00 AM
You can sell this stuff, Ashley. You should write romance novels.
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Date: 7/2/2009 10:54:00 PM
I like this. You really put you feelings in the words.
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Date: 7/2/2009 2:52:00 AM
Beautiful=)Like watching swans do it=p
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Date: 7/2/2009 1:04:00 AM
nice, like, i feel the passion in the words.
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