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Snuggling up to me with words that endear Whispering sweet nothings into my ear Enchanting words murmured bring me such delight Encircling my waist you hold me so tight Tenderly kissing me before its time to say goodnight Next minute you surprise me and get down on one knee Open a red velvet box and then you propose to me Tears spring to my eyes and I whisper to you How happy I’ll be when we wed and say ‘I do’ I lovingly look into your sapphire blue eyes Now we share a kiss, our love we cannot disguise Gently we embrace, you wrap me in your strong arms Such a perfect night… I surrender to your charms Sweet Nothings Contest Sponsored by Julie Leigh Rodeheaver 11-18-17

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/24/2017 5:24:00 AM

All so lovely, Jan! Congratulations! xx

Jan Allison
Date: 11/24/2017 12:25:00 PM

Thanks kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 11/23/2017 2:34:00 AM

Blessings and congratulations on your wonderful win, Jan - keep up the great work, my friend! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/23/2017 7:19:00 PM

Thanks Greg:-) hugs jan xx

Sonia Walker

Date: 11/21/2017 7:39:00 PM

Jan, a very romantic acrostic poem which not only rhymes but flows beautifully. Congratulations on your placement. ~ Sonia

Jan Allison
Date: 11/22/2017 5:34:00 AM

Thanks Sonia I don't often do rhyming acrostics so I thought it would be a little more challenging especially as I find writing romantic poems so difficult as I much prefer humour:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 11/20/2017 1:50:00 PM

Very lovely and romantic Jan! Congratulations on your win!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2017 4:21:00 PM

Thanks Connie i much prefer to write humour, I find writing romance difficult:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 11/19/2017 10:25:00 PM

Charming, Jan. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/20/2017 6:49:00 AM

thanks Line:-) hugs jan xx

Edward Mccall

Date: 11/19/2017 2:25:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Jan. Such a sweet acrostic and so creative too well done my dear soup friend well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2017 2:26:00 PM

Thanks Edward I shy away from romantic poems I much prefer humour so i was delighted to be on the winner's list:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 11/19/2017 11:55:00 AM

LOvely write Jan...Congrats on your win

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2017 12:01:00 PM

Oh thanks Jospeh I didn't realise the contest had been judged!:-) I can't keep up with writing and commenting!:-) hugs jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 11/19/2017 9:09:00 AM

You have said a lot of sweet romantic things with this rhyming acrostic, Jan. Even sweet nothings can make the heart beat faster:) Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 11/19/2017 11:29:00 AM

Thanks Paul I much prefer writing humour but thought I would make an effort for the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/18/2017 10:59:00 AM

Awww, this is such a sappy (I mean that in the kindest way my friend), and romantic write! I really loved reading this elegant poem this morning! You have delighted me by your tenderness and of writing such a poem as this...I know it's not your strong suit but you did an excellent job! What a grandiose piece, Great Work Jan!!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2017 3:58:00 PM

Thanks Russell I struggle with romantic writes but tried my best for the contest, I will always prefer humourous writes:-) hugs jan xx

Eileen Manassian

Date: 11/18/2017 12:20:00 AM

Awwwww...nice to see a romantic piece from you, dear.

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2017 3:57:00 PM

Makes a change lol but I do struggle writing romance I leave it to you my friend the Queen of passion:-) hugs jan xx

Bjorn Wastvedt

Date: 11/17/2017 11:55:00 PM

Great Poem! :)

Jan Allison
Date: 11/18/2017 3:56:00 PM

Thanks Bjorn:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 11/17/2017 9:07:00 PM

Beautiful waiting for someone to say all that to me!! LOL

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2017 9:09:00 PM

Lol but never give up hope my friend - I find it so difficult to write romantic stuff I should leave it to Tim and co and stick to humour instead or just read comments on soup lol:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/17/2017 7:21:00 PM

Such a romantic, tender, sweet and charming write Jan. Captivating, enchanting and pure in it's love portrayed. Good luck in the contest!

Jan Allison
Date: 11/17/2017 7:32:00 PM

Thanks Susan I struggle with writing romantic poems I much prefer humour:-) hugs Jan xx