Sweet Night Music

My heart beats to dance with yours
As your voice sounds like smooth jazz
Our bodies sway in tempo
Fireside and fine wine


(Contest: Let's Do it. Sponsored by Nette Onclaud, written 8/9/26)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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September 2, 2026 at 9:57 AM
This is so incredibly smooth and sultry! I love the musicality of the lines—especially comparing a voice to 'smooth jazz' while the rhythm of the poem itself sways. You captured such a beautiful, intimate mood in just a few lines. Beautifully written! 💕
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September 2, 2026 at 3:22 PM
Simone, thank you.
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August 15, 2026 at 6:19 PM
Congrats! Lovely!
Kitchin Avatar
August 16, 2026 at 6:48 AM
Kim, thank you.
Lane Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 4:53 AM
Sounds like a cozy romantic night.
Kitchin Avatar
August 10, 2026 at 7:55 AM
Lin, thank you.
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