Deb M Poet Rhyme

-SWEET MAJESTY - POTD

I heard the wind quietly whisper your name
I saw your tears fall in the morning rain

I heard your laughter on a spring day crisp and bright
I felt your embrace In the warmth of the sunlight

I heard your wisdom in the lapping of the tide
I felt your love in a magical sunrise

I know you watch over me
I feel it in natures sweet majesty

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Terry Flood August 2, 2023 at 3:00 PM Big OOPS! Sorry it’s taken me a week, but belated congrats on this well deserved POTD, Deb. Hey, you can’t rush these things! Deb M August 3, 2023 at 5:32 AM Finally you make an appearance Mr Flood haha!! Thankyou Terry always lovely to see you my funny friend! Debx

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther August 1, 2023 at 11:15 PM Hey Deb M. I've just read your poem SWEET MAJESTY. you did A fantastic job. I enjoyed Reading your art. Peace! VBR black panther Deb M August 1, 2023 at 11:17 PM You are so kind VBR ….thankyou so much! Debx

I Am Anaya July 26, 2023 at 9:29 AM Such a sweet and touching POTD, Deb. Congratulations, hope you enjoyed the accolades! Deb M July 27, 2023 at 12:37 AM Thankyou Anaya….l appreciate your kind words ! Debx

Valsa George July 26, 2023 at 6:44 AM Lovely couplets ! Congratulations dear Deb on your POTD Deb M July 27, 2023 at 12:35 AM Oh thankyou Valsa always lovely to see your smiling face! Debx

Michael Tor July 26, 2023 at 5:30 AM Lovely Poetry Deb congratulations Dear... Deb M July 27, 2023 at 12:35 AM Thanks Michael….Debx

Joanna Daniel July 25, 2023 at 2:02 AM So lovely and touching, Deb, brilliant poetry:) congratulations on POTD:) Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:31 AM Hi Jo….l appreciate your lovely comment! Debx

Smita Kulkarni July 24, 2023 at 10:32 AM How beautiful Deb! Perfect description of feeling the majesty in the morning near tides!! Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:25 AM Hi Smita…thankyou so much…nice to meet you! Debx

Susan Lawrence July 24, 2023 at 5:45 AM Beautiful Deb …. A huge embrace received through your imagery and emotional landscape ! Belated congratulations on POTD ! Hugs, Susan :) Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:24 AM Hi Susan….always lovely to see you..,thankyou…Debx

Daisy Meadows July 23, 2023 at 11:18 PM Congratulations on your POTD. Well done. Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:23 AM Thankyou very much Jeanette! Debx

Kim Rodrigues July 23, 2023 at 6:50 PM Just beautiful! Congratulations, Deb! Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:23 AM Hi Kim….really appreciate your kind words! Debx

Shirley Hawkins July 23, 2023 at 5:13 PM Congratulations, Deb, POTD. It came as no surprise that this amazing poem won. Your lovely poems would be a joy for any reader. Wow! keep em coming, Deb XX Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:18 AM Shirley you are always my best supporter and l am always grateful for that….thankyou always! Debx

Brandy Nicole July 23, 2023 at 5:13 PM The final thought curls gently around me. Nature holds His touch, and my heart rejoices knowing this truth. Your words are beautiful in every way. Congratulations Deb, on Poem of the Day. Many wonderful blessings to you. :) Hugs, Brandy Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:22 AM And your comments are always so beautiful Brandy! Thankyou very much….Debx

Jay Narain July 23, 2023 at 10:42 AM nice poem, Deb, Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:20 AM Thankyou so much Jay! Debx

Jim Slaughter July 23, 2023 at 10:23 AM Very nice imagery, Deb, and congrats on POTD. Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:18 AM Why thankyou Jim! Debx

J. Summers July 23, 2023 at 8:43 AM Really good stuff. Congratulations on POTD honors. John Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:27 AM Hi John….thankyou appreciate your kindness! Debx

Bill Baker July 23, 2023 at 8:28 AM Back to say, Congratulations on your POTD, Deb. I glad others see to value of your thoughts through your poetry. Enjoy your special day of recognition. Hugs, Bill Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:31 AM You are so sweet to me Bill Baker my Texan buddy! As always Thankyou! Debx

Heidi Sands July 23, 2023 at 8:21 AM Congratulations for POTD. Beautiful :) Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:30 AM Thankyou so much Heidi! Debx

Kim Merryman July 23, 2023 at 8:14 AM Back to congratulate you on POTD! Blessings, Kim M Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:29 AM Hi Kim…l really appreciate your comment…Debx

Alexis Y. July 23, 2023 at 7:58 AM Wow! Deb, What a lovely poem written straight from the heart. You can feel his presence everywhere, nature is no exception. Well done. Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a nice day. Enjoy your Sunday:-) Alexis Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:28 AM Such a lovely comment Alexis….thankyou….Debx

Paula Goldsmith July 23, 2023 at 7:56 AM Congratulations on your POTD win. Your "Sweet Majesty" is a lovely write. Great last two lines. He Does... Have a blessed day/week.......................

Christuraj Alex July 23, 2023 at 6:09 AM "I know you watch over me I feel it in natures sweet majesty" - An absolute trust and faith and hope are explicitly expressed. Congratulations! Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:28 AM Hey Alex….thankyou for your kind words! Debx

Vijay Pandit July 23, 2023 at 6:04 AM BIG congrats on POTD, Deb. A delightful poem, heartfelt, deeply passionate--it is you! Enjoy your special day today. Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:26 AM Always love and appreciate your comments Vijay…Thankyou…Debx

Daniel Turner July 23, 2023 at 6:00 AM Congratulations young lady on POTD. Nicely penned! Seeing how you are such a trouble maker, it's good to know someone is watching over you:) LOL Be well my friend! Deb M July 25, 2023 at 5:17 AM Hello young man…Trouble maker oh thats right l forgot l was one!! Hehe…Miss your banter! Young Lady xx

Warren Doll July 23, 2023 at 5:39 AM Deb, congratulations on POTD. Well-deserved~ Warren

John Lawless July 23, 2023 at 5:23 AM Ah, but to hear one must learn to listen. Beautifully done Deb.

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