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April- 3- 2025
Write Nine Beautiful Lines Poetry Contest
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Sweet Love at Twilight- POTD

“When you find someone who can turn your world around for better, tell him/her everything you wish to say. Perhaps your dreams that never came true may be realized. Who knows”~ By Poet


Slowly fades the light of day’s solemn hours. The sky in colors of amber and pink marvels. Desert roses from crannies peek their heads out. Here amid hills and slopes, we roam hand in hand, Tireless and unvexed in thoughtless joy. Stirred to ecstasy by the sweet serenade of birds. Among the hills I know of a dreamy lake To its bank, shall we go where nothing disturbs? There I'll affix the stamp of binding love. Are you ready?
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Kauffman Avatar
May 19, 2025 at 11:54 AM
Valsa, how did I miss this lovely, tender poem of romantic love? It is so beautiful. Congratulations on your POTD and so wonderful to see it recognized on the Top 100 New Poems list among other honors. Simply dreamy, dear friend! Blessings of joy to you!
Junaid Avatar
April 13, 2025 at 10:52 PM
Such a pretty picture you have painted here, dear Valsa. Romance at its finest. Be Blessed <3
Miller Avatar
April 11, 2025 at 7:40 AM
Very romantic and so well written, absolutely love the question at the end, congratulations
Fowler Avatar
April 9, 2025 at 6:09 AM
Sweet and romantic Valsa. Congratulations dear poet friend! :)
Andresen Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 12:10 PM
- Back with a congratulation, Valsa :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 12:07 PM
WOW!!! A double win. Hooray!!! Back with Congratulations on this win. I loved reading your wonderful "Sweet Love at Twilight" write and quote again. Have a blessed day with your new win............
Rodrigues Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Ready or not as you roam through hills and slopes to declare your love! Congrats!
Poet Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 7:45 AM
The poem evokes a distinct sense of sweetness. Nuanced feelings and visuals. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, dear Valsa
Guptar Avatar
April 7, 2025 at 1:23 AM
Congratulations, dear friend , on your top placement in this poetry contest with a with marvellous poem with lyrical rhythm. Particularly loved the last line. Wish you a pleasant stroll to your poetical lake.
Kaufman Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 12:44 PM
Dear Valsa, I apologize for this belated congratulations on your POTD. You have painted such a lovely visual of a lover's tryst. Blessings to you..
George Avatar
April 6, 2025 at 10:45 PM
There is nothing to apologise about it, dear Nancy. I am so happy about your appreciation and comment. Thanks a lot dear friend.
Kitchin Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 5:13 AM
Valsa, a sweet poem, a belated congratulations on POTD.
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:45 PM
Dear Tania, thanks a lot. Your comment though belated is valued much.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 4:27 AM
Love it. Congrats and God bless you. love, Gina
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:42 PM
Dear Gina, thank you so much for your congratulations and encouragement. Stay Blessed always!
HAYNES Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:29 PM
a sweet love poem/ i very much liked
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:41 PM
Dear William, thanks for your kind visit to my page and also for the lovely comment.
Nicole Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 6:33 PM
Dear Valsa, your quote is beautiful in every way. Dreams can come true, especially when you're with someone who helps you become so much more. A ' sky in colors of amber and pink, ' walking ' hand in hand. ' That image is so breathtaking, my dear friend. The moments you paint are dreamy and romantic. Congratulations on Poem of the Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:39 PM
Your lovely comment has sent me to cloud nine. Thanks a lot dear Brandy.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 3:25 PM
Congratulations, Dear Valsa, on your POTD honour. Enjoyed this beautifully crafted romantic poem!
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:37 PM
Dear Mala, sweet friend, thanks a lot.
Sands Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 11:35 AM
I love this and your quote at the top too. A Fave for me .Congratulations for POTD :)
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:36 PM
Dear Heidi, thanks a lot for making my poem your FAVE. Have a great weekend.
Empress Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 10:54 AM
Back to congratulate you on receiving POTD. Well deserved
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:34 PM
Dear sweet Empress. Thanks a lot for your second visit. I shall look up at your page.
Bartley Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 10:09 AM
Congratulations on your POTD! Thanks for sharing!
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:33 PM
Dear Benjamin. Thanks a lot for your visit to my page and your encouraging comment.
Jones Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 9:57 AM
Love your quote! Congratulations dear Valsa on potd!
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:31 PM
Glad you liked my quote. Thanks a lot dear Karen.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 9:53 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. I loved reading your wonderful "Sweet Love at Twilight" write and quote. Have a blessed day with your win.........
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:30 PM
Dear Pula, you are very kind. Thanks for your comment.
Rodgers Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 9:06 AM
Dear Valsa, I stand and applaud your poem, your words, your mastery, and your POTD! YEAH!! Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:28 PM
You have made me feel so good by your second visit to my poem. Thanks a lot dear Daniel.
Read Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved POTD Valsa.
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:27 PM
Thank you so much dear John.
Grubb Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 6:14 AM
Imagery and emotion...the soul of poetry! It's an eternal feeling. Beautiful POTD, Valsa.
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:26 PM
I feel thrilled by your comment, dear friend Mickey. Thanks a lot.
Gifford Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 5:56 AM
Hello Valsa, congratulations on your POTD win with this beautifully romantic write. Loved the ending. Enjoy your day my friend.
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:25 PM
Dear Zyrool, thanks a lot for penning a few words of encouragement. Love is a theme that we poets always like to celebrate.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 4, 2025 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations for your POTD. Well deserved.
George Avatar
April 5, 2025 at 10:21 PM
Much gratitude to you dear Victor. Have a great Sunday.
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