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Sweet Little Honey

"SWEET  LITTLE  HONEY"

My father had no respect for the world..
A big drug trafficker..
When I was just a little girl!
Living  for the glory of money.
He smiled and looked down at me..
Sitting me on his lap he called me his, "Sweet little honey!"
And told me, " This job is going to bring him to his death."
Handing me a back pack.
My daddy send me to what I thought was a school in Texas.
Giving me a kiss and a pat on my back.
He held my hand while we crossed the, Rio Grand.
Carrying a 10 pound educational white brick book.
I walked with a smile beyond the border into another land.
Waving  good-bye with his devilish look.
I thought of nothing and got on that bus.
5 years pass,  I'm 15  living a life like a crook.

One day I asked my dad for some money.
He sat me down calling me his, "Sweet little honey."
And told me, "It's all his fault for leading me the wrong way!"
Denying me the needs for my addiction.
I got upset and aggravated by his reaction.
I pulled out a gun with out a word to say.
Pulling the trigger was my action.
With out feeling guilt, I looked back at that one day.
He called me his, "Sweet little honey."
Handing me a 10 pound educational white brick book.
Now I'm the one waving good-bye with the devilish look..

by;p.d.


** not my story**
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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A  Avatar
February 4, 2016 at 11:06 PM
darn jail time **SKAT**
Yvonne Avatar
September 23, 2014 at 1:24 AM
I have never trusted those white books. They make me suspicious. GREAT write!
Davis Avatar
March 19, 2014 at 9:59 PM
PD Such a heart wrenching and emotional write. A very powerful story that is full of feeling and depth. Glad it is not real. Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Fallen Hero poem Hugs
Maverick Avatar
January 29, 2014 at 1:15 PM
What a hard hitting write dear P D, keep well Joe..)
Dietrich Avatar
January 14, 2014 at 12:53 AM
soupmail.
Dietrich Avatar
April 25, 2013 at 5:56 PM
hey, PD. just stopping by to say hi. your latest contest is a hoot. I have only one small poem for it, just couldn't think of any longer terrible ones. hahaha. (you will have to tell me which poems of mine suck, because they are my children and I love them all)
Duncan Avatar
April 20, 2013 at 4:06 PM
WoW, Like this "sweet little honey" of a story. Seems like I seen this story somewhere on TV, maybe it was Blow with J. Depp ? I love it though, glad you liked my wild strawberries, have a great day PD ;}
Long Avatar
May 21, 2011 at 7:13 PM
this was awesome!! cory
Horne Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 8:43 AM
Wow, awesome write, PD. I'm so glad it's not autobiographical!
Brumley Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 6:17 AM
Wow! Pistol packing PD, remind me to never call you my "Sweet Little Honey"! I think I would have sold the gun and dropped a dime on good ole river wading, drug trading, law evading dad:) However, this poem explains your sudden loss of interest. Don't let the smoke get in your eyes:)
Seraphin Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 7:03 AM
* what a night and day without much of a dawns poem * “Beautiful LeeAnn” * such parallel unto the shadowed truths of many * and to find “Your Beautiful Light” * salvaging perhaps the wresting of a tad of darkened matter from * “The Beauty of Your Eyes” * is sooo good to behold although * scars always remain for those whom actually suffer these pangs * “Magnificent Creation of Poetry” * hugs and kisses * kisses and hugs * always and forever * and forever beyond * sarah
Zzzzz Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 1:44 PM
A very dark write, with a hint of humour! Nicely done.
Alcazaren Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 4:58 PM
Thanks for reading my poem and I'm glad I came to return the favor. I enjoyed this, something about the loss of innocence of the "sweet little honey" from her point of view, very interesting story.
Rutherford Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 6:46 AM
Wow you sure can write D. P. !! Love how you sumed up in the last line. Awesome poem.Anne
Dietrich Avatar
March 26, 2011 at 7:28 AM
Rereading this one, you wrote it very well, PD. Glad you are a fan of Greek gods, some of them are not so nice, but this one was amazing! (he is the topic of nearly all my romantic poems and he was a real guy who came and went quickly, much too quickly that summer of my young life!)
Johnson Avatar
March 18, 2011 at 5:16 AM
Hey babe great verse true story for some born on wrong side of the tracks I have a daughter, thats one thank you for your comment and for your vivid verse i'll have to canter off lament a child of mine by birth Don
Dietrich Avatar
March 17, 2011 at 11:49 PM
Hey, PD. just saying goodnight to you before I go off here! Hope you had a great St.Patrick's Day!!
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
February 27, 2011 at 12:26 PM
Tough story, all too true for many. When your life is a living hell, the conscience begins to wear thin. Good write. Glad it isn't your story. Vince
Duncan Avatar
February 11, 2011 at 1:30 PM
I love this,, thank you for posting it ;} Debbie
Anish Avatar
February 10, 2011 at 9:28 AM
Reminds me of the Grateful Dead song - "Me and My Uncle". Dark, brooding work! Love Matthew Anish
Marcum Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 3:46 PM
smile -- i cannot tell, "Your Splendours," enough how that, this Amazing painting sheds sooo much sweetness upon, "Your Radiant Relections Glow My Dear." ~ and it surely does seem as, Yes, i have found my humble self but another pair, of "Beautiful Faves." ~ and 'thank you,' for blessing my Soul with, "Your Loveliness'," kind com; very nice and, "Precious" ~ love, Always, christopher ~
Marcum Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 3:39 PM
smile -- nothing like a sweet daddies love ~ Smile ~ "Your Beauty," made myself laugh aloud my dear, "Precious & 'Beautiful, Sydney LeeAnn.'" ~ this is truly a masterpiece of one may say, fact amid fiction poes within creations, moments of wisdom, empathy and both, dark and light although, the shades of hues, tilt towards the gray; at least, upon the lines of parallels truths in reality.... -- cont:)
George   Avatar
February 5, 2011 at 1:32 AM
Well! I don't know whose story it is, but I love the way you tell it. Lainie
Inka Avatar
February 4, 2011 at 10:13 AM
So glad it's not your story, and thankful it's not mine. Wish it was no one's. Nice write
Culverhouse Avatar
February 1, 2011 at 6:37 AM
i am glad it is not your story....though I bet it does happen like that. so sad!
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