SWEET GIRL

Intro — Spoken
Funny how a few lines of poetry... can turn into something real.

Verse 1
Sweet girl… I scribbled down a line
Didn’t plan it — just spilled out in time
My pulse won’t quit, it skips a beat
Can’t tell if it’s your heart… or just my feet
You signed your name with just one star
And dotted the “i” like a shooting scar

Chorus
Sweet girl, you take my breath away
You somehow make the grey days fade
And I don’t know — is this all pretend?
Or something real we don’t have to defend?
Sweet girl… I’m trying to choose
But I’m fallin’ — yeah, fallin’ for you

Verse 2
I read your note out in the rain
The ink ran wild — kind of like your name
You wrote, “Love finds its way through haze”
I don’t know… but I’ve been stuck for days
Just the thought… of what you feel
It knocks me sideways — makes it real

Chorus
Sweet girl, you take my breath away
You’ve got that way of changin’ my days
So tell me now — am I just some muse?
Or are we both scared to really lose?
Sweet girl… don’t keep me confused
'Cause I’m fallin’ — fallin’ for you

Bridge
I’ve faked it once or twice before
But this one, girl… I’d fight a war
I’ve walked away when dreams got thin
But not this time — not if you let me in

Final Chorus
Sweet girl… I can scribble too
But every page still bleeds back to you
No clever twist, no last excuse
You’re not a dream — you’re not a muse
Sweet girl… you lit the fuse
And I’m fallin’… fallin’ — yeah, it’s true
I’m fallin’… in love with you

Outro Tag
Yeah, I’m fallin’…
Not just writing…
This time… it’s true.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Callus Avatar
October 30, 2018 at 9:19 AM
Mutual attraction, but there is still the need to know where one stands! As always, your romantic pen has lost none of its sheen, Dave. Regards // paul
Lamoureux Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 7:36 PM
The prince of romance strikes again. You could give Cupid a run for his job. Straight to the heart.
Beaufort Avatar
October 29, 2018 at 5:30 PM
You take your time describing all this, and this IS the sign of a great lover. Someone who is patient, giving, and who has the ability to be slow!!
Raven Avatar
October 23, 2018 at 3:47 PM
Hi Lyric, love, romance, your special words singing, what more could anyone want. This has been a joy to read my friend. Love comes in many ways, be it joy or sadness, you always have words for the emotion. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.
Onclaud Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 2:59 PM
a lovable melody as i imagine you pining, D... get that girl!... huggs
One Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 5:59 AM
Sounds like a sweet girl... not one to let go.... You have a great way with words my friend..
Messina Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 9:51 PM
Ahh...Romance, such a beautiful thing. Great work LM...All the best...Charlie
Mcguire Avatar
October 10, 2018 at 1:57 AM
I think I might I'm almost sure I love this poem
Roberts Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 11:39 PM
hi great write as usual ...Seren
Nicole Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 10:35 PM
That sweet ache of love- it does linger, after the fall. One that leaves you in complete awe. It sounds like you are circling around these moments. So many breathless moments! You are drifting in the sapphire blue, or the midnight hour- and you know, she is waiting for you. Once again Lyric Man, your thoughts hold such beauty, love and romance. :) Brandy
Safronick Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 7:09 PM
So sweet and heartfelt. A wonderful read.
Sands Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 2:46 PM
A this is filled with sweetness. Well written and enjoyable to read today :)
Cunningham Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 1:29 PM
Another great romantic lyric Dave. Tom.
Pandit Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 12:51 PM
Sweet song for a sweet girl..wonderful, lively tone..flowing in your musical words, LM.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 8, 2018 at 11:43 AM
Hello Lyric Man, I read this as a love poem. A romantic love poem. Loved it!!! Have a nice day my friend.
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