Sweet Girl

Sweet Girl.. I can scribble too My heart’s beating so fast I think I might.. I’m almost sure.. Falling in love with you Sweet Girl.. Take my breath away Kiss goodbye these blues Please make it clear Cause I’ve gotta know Is this me or is it my muse Can simple words Break through fantasy’s wall You once said you believe Can those arms wrap Around more than imagination From poetry.. love conceive Just the thought Oh, what are yours.. Has left me kind of shaking Could this really be Take my hand and see Together a chance we’re taking Sweet Girl.. Take my breath away Kiss goodbye these blues Please make it clear Cause I’ve gotta know Is this me or is it my muse Sweet Girl.. I can scribble too My heart’s beating so fast I think I might.. I’m almost sure.. Falling in love with you ~Lyric Man

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Paul Callus

Date: 10/30/2018 9:19:00 AM

Mutual attraction, but there is still the need to know where one stands! As always, your romantic pen has lost none of its sheen, Dave. Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 10/29/2018 7:36:00 PM

The prince of romance strikes again. You could give Cupid a run for his job. Straight to the heart.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/29/2018 5:30:00 PM

You take your time describing all this, and this IS the sign of a great lover. Someone who is patient, giving, and who has the ability to be slow!!

Vladislav Raven

Date: 10/23/2018 3:47:00 PM

Hi Lyric, love, romance, your special words singing, what more could anyone want. This has been a joy to read my friend. Love comes in many ways, be it joy or sadness, you always have words for the emotion. Have a wonderful Wednesday. Your friend always....Mike.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/16/2018 2:59:00 PM

a lovable melody as i imagine you pining, D... get that girl!... huggs

Silent One

Date: 10/15/2018 5:59:00 AM

Sounds like a sweet girl... not one to let go.... You have a great way with words my friend..

Charles Messina

Date: 10/10/2018 9:51:00 PM

Ahh...Romance, such a beautiful thing. Great work LM...All the best...Charlie

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 10/10/2018 1:57:00 AM

I think I might I'm almost sure I love this poem

Seren Roberts

Date: 10/8/2018 11:39:00 PM

hi great write as usual ...Seren

Brandy Nicole

Date: 10/8/2018 10:35:00 PM

That sweet ache of love- it does linger, after the fall. One that leaves you in complete awe. It sounds like you are circling around these moments. So many breathless moments! You are drifting in the sapphire blue, or the midnight hour- and you know, she is waiting for you. Once again Lyric Man, your thoughts hold such beauty, love and romance. :) Brandy