Theresa A.K.A. Reecie | + Follow Poet |
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Sweet Dreams

Follow
Right path
Walk
Do not run
Maternally
Given strength
We'll get hurt
You will learn
Complications
Simplified
The world spins
Re-cycle
Never shifting
Boring
Just to think
All will end
Higher
Looking down
Shaking fingers
Holding dreams
Forward once
Back thrice
Relationship trends
Lacking
Find out
Secrets
Giving up
Mentally
Horrendous
Tired strength
Purposely always
Pessimistic
Bouts of
Happiness
Black and blue
Constellations
Nighty night
I love stars

~Reecie

Copyright © Theresa A.K.A. Reecie | Year Posted 2012

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 2/20/2012 6:04:00 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Theresa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/19/2012 6:22:00 AM It was a pleasure to take a visit on yours poetry pages to day Theresa.I have a poem:"I had a dream" (I love stars to). - oxox love Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Kirby Magee-Dittberner Date: 2/18/2012 9:17:00 PM Wow, I am usually repulsed by poems with many short lines, but this one really got me revved up. I feel like I just journeyed through your mind, and I especially loved the line(s) "Mentally Horrendous, tired strength, purposely always pessimistic," particularly the last part, because I hate it when people are like that. Anyway, thank you for sharing this with us, it's an interesting style!  -KMD Login to Reply Theresa A.K.A. Reecie Date: 2/18/2012 9:34:00 PM Thank you! It all sort of poured out of me at once and when I was done there was a lot of rearranging needed. I'm glad to have shared the hard work and get a pleasant response!