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Sweet Dreams

Follow Right path Walk Do not run Maternally Given strength We'll get hurt You will learn Complications Simplified The world spins Re-cycle Never shifting Boring Just to think All will end Higher Looking down Shaking fingers Holding dreams Forward once Back thrice Relationship trends Lacking Find out Secrets Giving up Mentally Horrendous Tired strength Purposely always Pessimistic Bouts of Happiness Black and blue Constellations Nighty night I love stars ~Reecie

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 2/20/2012 6:04:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Theresa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/19/2012 6:22:00 AM

It was a pleasure to take a visit on yours poetry pages to day Theresa.I have a poem:"I had a dream" (I love stars to). - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kirby Magee-Dittberner

Date: 2/18/2012 9:17:00 PM

Wow, I am usually repulsed by poems with many short lines, but this one really got me revved up. I feel like I just journeyed through your mind, and I especially loved the line(s) "Mentally Horrendous, tired strength, purposely always pessimistic," particularly the last part, because I hate it when people are like that. Anyway, thank you for sharing this with us, it's an interesting style! -KMD

Theresa A.K.A. Reecie
Date: 2/18/2012 9:34:00 PM

Thank you! It all sort of poured out of me at once and when I was done there was a lot of rearranging needed. I'm glad to have shared the hard work and get a pleasant response!