Theresa A.K.A. Reecie Poet Free verse

Sweet Dreams

Follow
Right path
Walk
Do not run
Maternally
Given strength
We'll get hurt
You will learn
Complications
Simplified
The world spins
Re-cycle
Never shifting
Boring
Just to think
All will end
Higher
Looking down
Shaking fingers
Holding dreams
Forward once
Back thrice
Relationship trends
Lacking
Find out
Secrets
Giving up
Mentally
Horrendous
Tired strength
Purposely always
Pessimistic
Bouts of
Happiness
Black and blue
Constellations
Nighty night
I love stars

~Reecie

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Carol Sunshine Brown February 20, 2012 at 6:04 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Theresa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Anne-Lise Andresen February 19, 2012 at 6:22 AM It was a pleasure to take a visit on yours poetry pages to day Theresa.I have a poem:"I had a dream" (I love stars to). - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kirby Magee-Dittberner February 18, 2012 at 9:17 PM Wow, I am usually repulsed by poems with many short lines, but this one really got me revved up. I feel like I just journeyed through your mind, and I especially loved the line(s) "Mentally Horrendous, tired strength, purposely always pessimistic," particularly the last part, because I hate it when people are like that. Anyway, thank you for sharing this with us, it's an interesting style!  -KMD Theresa A.K.A. Reecie February 18, 2012 at 9:34 PM Thank you! It all sort of poured out of me at once and when I was done there was a lot of rearranging needed. I'm glad to have shared the hard work and get a pleasant response!